Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response and explain briefly why you don't write much, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases.

Example: No, I don't write a lot because I usually use my phone to communicate. However, sometimes I like to write in my diary to record my thoughts.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct grammar. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific about what you write and why.

Example: I like to write notes about my daily routine in my diary because it helps me keep track of my activities and reflect on them when I have free time.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to directly answer the question and explain why what you write might change, using simple and correct sentences. Avoid unrelated information.

Example: Yes, what I write changes because my ideas and interests change over time. For example, sometimes I write about my hobbies, which can be different from day to day.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear preference and reasons, using complete sentences and linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I prefer handwriting to typing because I am not very good at typing on the computer. Also, handwriting helps me focus better when I write.

× Not really, I'm not interested in writing because two days it is more popular with using mobile phones bad.

✓ Not really, I'm not interested in writing because nowadays it is more popular to use mobile phones.

The phrase 'two days' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'nowadays' to indicate the current time. Also, 'with using mobile phones bad' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to use' instead of 'with using', and 'bad' is unnecessary here.

× Sometimes I enjoy writing my diary in the book.

✓ Sometimes I enjoy writing in my diary.

The phrase 'writing my diary in the book' is awkward and unclear. The correct expression is 'writing in my diary' to indicate the action of making entries in a diary.

× I like to make notes in my daily routine, in my diary, to keep track of my life and I can read or memory again, memorize again when I am free.

✓ I like to make notes about my daily routine in my diary to keep track of my life, and I can read or memorize them again when I am free.

The preposition 'in' before 'my daily routine' is incorrect; 'about' is more appropriate. Also, 'memory again' is incorrect; the verb 'memorize' should be used. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, the thing that I write maybe changing because my deal I also changing everyday an the more word the things that are interested also transforming sometimes I am in joint playing games so.

✓ Yes, the things that I write may be changing because my ideas are also changing every day, and the words and things that interest me are also transforming. Sometimes I am playing games with friends.

The sentence has multiple singular/plural errors: 'thing' should be 'things', 'maybe' should be 'may be', 'deal' should be 'ideas', 'changing' needs auxiliary verbs, 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb), 'more word' should be 'words', 'things that are interested' should be 'things that interest me', and 'joint playing games' is unclear and corrected to 'playing games with friends'.

× I would choose handwriting over. Typing because I'm not good at typing at my computer is. Moreover, it. Handwriting let me to focus. In an.

✓ I would choose handwriting over typing because I'm not good at typing on my computer. Moreover, handwriting helps me to focus.

The sentence has incorrect prepositions: 'typing at my computer' should be 'typing on my computer'. The sentence fragments are corrected and combined for clarity. 'Handwriting let me to focus' is corrected to 'handwriting helps me to focus' for grammatical correctness.