Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has many repetitions and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating phrases and focus on giving a clear, concise response. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and keep your answer within 4-5 sentences.

Example: I enjoy writing, especially journaling, although I don't write often due to my busy schedule. Writing helps me relax and organise my thoughts, which I find very beneficial. Additionally, I like to plan my activities through writing, which keeps me focused.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many repetitions and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and directly. Use linking words to explain why you like writing and provide specific reasons or feelings to support your answer.

Example: I enjoy writing about my thoughts and imagination because it helps me connect with myself. Writing allows me to understand my feelings better, which gives me a great sense of satisfaction.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Avoid filler words and try to give a direct response. Explain your opinion clearly and support it with reasons or examples. Keep your sentences structured and coherent.

Example: I don't think the things I write will change much because I mainly focus on journaling. This habit is important to me, and I believe I will continue it throughout my life.

Suggestion: Your answer has many repetitions and incomplete sentences. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why you prefer handwriting over typing. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and complete.

Example: I prefer handwriting over typing because I am not very comfortable with technology. Writing on paper helps me understand and organise my thoughts better.

× But I really, but I went, but I really have a habit of writing journals.

✓ But I really have a habit of writing journals.

The phrase 'but I went' is incorrect in this context as it does not fit the intended meaning. The student likely meant to say 'I really have a habit' without 'but I went'. The error is related to incorrect past tense usage and unnecessary insertion of 'went'. Removing 'but I went' corrects the sentence.

× I like to pend on my own, like I like to spend on my own thoughts and my own imaginations into a book.

✓ I like to spend time on my own thoughts and my own imaginations in a book.

The verb 'spend' requires an object such as 'time' and the preposition 'on' should be used correctly. 'Pend' is a typo for 'spend'. Also, 'into a book' is better expressed as 'in a book' to indicate writing or recording thoughts. The error is due to incorrect preposition use and missing object after 'spend'.

× It I think it really connects me to my it helps me to connect me to myself and understand and understand myself and it is so great and it is a great feeling to.

✓ I think it really connects me to myself and helps me understand myself, and it is a great feeling.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced pronouns like 'it' and 'me' and repeated phrases. Correct pronoun use and sentence restructuring are needed for clarity. The error is due to incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure.

× I think, uh, not really the things I write would change the 'cause I really don't because I'm not into writing so much.

✓ I think, uh, the things I write would not really change because I'm not into writing so much.

The phrase 'not really the things I write would change the 'cause' is awkward and incorrect. The pronoun and sentence structure need correction to express the intended meaning clearly. The error is due to incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure.

× So I think that will remain as search for. For my life. For my entire life.

✓ So I think that will remain as such for my life, for my entire life.

The word 'search' is incorrect here; it should be 'such' to mean 'the same'. Also, the sentence fragments should be combined for clarity. The error is due to incorrect pronoun and word choice leading to sentence fragments.

× I'm not tech savvy and I'm not into and I'm not take tech savvy and I'm not into typing and I'm not into typing things on my phone or on my computer.

✓ I'm not tech savvy and I'm not into typing things on my phone or on my computer.

The sentence has repeated and incorrect phrases like 'and I'm not take tech savvy'. Removing redundancy and correcting pronoun use improves clarity. The error is due to incorrect pronoun use and sentence structure.

× I really prefer to write it on. I really prefer to write it on paper forward for better understanding of my own thoughts I could relate to and I could.

✓ I really prefer to write on paper for better understanding of my own thoughts that I can relate to.

The phrase 'write it on' is incomplete and 'paper forward' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring. The error is due to incorrect preposition use and sentence structure.