Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, đồng thời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu.

Example: Yes, I write quite often, especially for my school assignments. Writing helps me organize my thoughts and improve my language skills.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

Example: I like to write stories and poems because they allow me to express my creativity and improve my handwriting.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời lặp lại ý và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và giải thích rõ ràng về sự thay đổi trong sở thích viết của bạn.

Example: Yes, I believe the things I write will change as I grow older because my interests and experiences will be different.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Example: I prefer handwriting because it allows me to be more creative and I enjoy writing poems by hand rather than typing them.

× From my school and so is happens to be the one I really need to finish my 2:00 and also unlocks levels too.

✓ From my school, it happens to be the one I really need to finish by 2:00, and it also unlocks levels.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect word order, making it difficult to understand. The correction rearranges the sentence to clarify meaning and corrects verb usage. Suggestion: organize ideas clearly and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× What are elective rights? Because it is really special and also writes helped me to improve my handwriting skills as I think it is really really bad.

✓ What are elective rights? Because they are really special and also writing helped me to improve my handwriting skills as I think it is really bad.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'elective rights' which is plural, so 'they' should be used. Also, 'writes' is incorrect; the gerund 'writing' fits better here. Suggestion: match pronouns in number with their antecedents and use correct verb forms.

× So I think it will change because I think it will change because as I grow up, my interest will be more different from when I was now. So yeah, I think things are about to change as my interest activity will change why I grow order.

✓ I think it will change because as I grow up, my interests will be different from now. So yeah, I think things are about to change as my interests change when I grow older.

The original sentence is repetitive and contains awkward phrasing and incorrect word choice ('why I grow order'). The correction removes redundancy and corrects word choice and tense. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct comparative forms and tenses.

× Or are people handwriting because I could get some creativity when I doing it? And also I would like to. Write a beautiful poem about lower skin accounting. So yeah, I will prefer handwriting more than typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I can be creative when I do it. Also, I would like to write a beautiful poem about love and skin care. So yeah, I prefer handwriting more than typing.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has incomplete sentences. 'Or are people handwriting' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'When I doing it' should be 'when I do it'. Also, 'lower skin accounting' seems to be a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'love and skin care' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct pronouns and verb forms, and ensure sentences are complete and clear.