Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy (e.g., "so colorful" and "brightens up my space" convey similar ideas).

Example: Yes, I love flowers. I usually keep fresh blooms in my bedroom because their color and scent make the room feel cheerful and calm. For example, I grow lavender and hibiscus in my garden, which both smell lovely and attract butterflies.

Suggestion: Make your response grammatically correct and more specific. Start with a direct statement, then give one clear supporting detail and a brief reason. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" correctly.

Example: Yes, my mother especially loves flowers. She tends a small garden at home and grows many plants, such as lavender, because she appreciates their color and fragrance.

Suggestion: Organize your answer into a clear topic sentence and concise supporting points. Correct grammar (singular/plural, articles) and reduce repetition of "especially." Mention one or two specific examples.

Example: Yes, flowers are common in my community. People often decorate for events like weddings with floral arrangements, and you also see potted plants outside many houses.

Suggestion: Respond directly and concisely: say whether you do, then give a specific reason and an example. Avoid awkward phrasing like "captivates my eyes." Use linking words such as "so" or "for example."

Example: Yes, I often photograph flowers because I love nature. For example, I take pictures of gardens and single blooms on my phone to save peaceful scenes I can look at later.

Suggestion: Start with a clear general statement about the custom, then give a specific occasion and brief reason. Correct grammar (capitalization, subject-verb agreement) and avoid vague phrases like "capture every moment."

Example: Yes, people commonly send flowers for special occasions. For example, flowers are popular gifts for birthdays, weddings and funerals because they express emotion and make recipients feel appreciated.

× Yes, I enjoy having flowers in my home, especially in my bedroom because it is so colorful and it's refreshing fragrance brightens up my space.

✓ Yes, I enjoy having flowers in my home, especially in my bedroom, because it is so colorful and its refreshing fragrance brightens up my space.

The error is using the contraction 'it's' which means 'it is' instead of the possessive adjective 'its'. Use 'its' to show that the fragrance belongs to the bedroom. Also add a comma before 'because' for clarity.

× And in my garden I love growing different kinds of flowers like lavender, hibiscus.

✓ And in my garden I love growing different kinds of flowers, such as lavender and hibiscus.

Use 'such as' or 'like' consistently with punctuation and use 'and' between the last two items in a list. Add a comma before the list for clarity.

× Apart from me, everyone around me loves flower, most especially my mom.

✓ Apart from me, everyone around me loves flowers, most especially my mom.

The noun should be plural 'flowers' because 'everyone' likes flowers in general; 'flower' singular is incorrect here.

× We have a very small garden in our house where my mom grows different kind of plants and one of the ones that stands out most is the lavender and it's because of its beauty.

✓ We have a very small garden in our house where my mom grows different kinds of plants, and one of the ones that stands out most is the lavender because of its beauty.

Use 'different kinds of' (plural) to match 'plants'. Remove the redundant 'it's' and restructure to 'is the lavender because of its beauty' for clarity. Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses.

× It's rare not to see flowers around my community because this is one thing people in my community enjoy having, especially when there is wedding parties, is one of the things that is used to decorate the halls, especially when you are in an outdoor wedding, it's beautiful.

✓ It's rare not to see flowers around my community because people here enjoy them, especially for wedding parties, where they are used to decorate halls; outdoor weddings are particularly beautiful.

Original sentence is run-on and repetitive. Simplify structure: use 'people here enjoy them' (pronoun 'them' refers to flowers), plural 'wedding parties', and break into clearer clauses. Use semicolon or separate sentences to avoid run-on.

× Because of my love for nature, one of the moments I love to capture the most is beautiful scene like a garden full of flowering plants.

✓ Because of my love for nature, one of the moments I love to capture the most is a beautiful scene, like a garden full of flowering plants.

Missing article 'a' before 'beautiful scene'. Also add comma before the example 'like'. The gerund 'flowering plants' is fine.

× And this is because it's something that captivates my eyes whenever I open my phone.

✓ And this is because it's something that captivates me whenever I open my phone.

Use 'captivates me' rather than 'captivates my eyes' for more natural English. 'Captivate' takes a human object (me).

× For Beautiful moments, flowers is one of the many gifts people exchange with each other because of its value and it also helps to capture every moment and it makes people feel good and confident having it with them.

✓ For beautiful moments, flowers are one of the many gifts people exchange with each other because of their value; they also help capture moments and make people feel good and confident when they have them.

Use lowercase 'beautiful'. Subject-verb agreement: 'flowers are' (plural). Use plural possessive pronoun 'their'. Replace 'it' with 'they/them' to match plural noun. Simplify and split clauses for clarity.