Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and use correct expressions. For example, instead of saying "a great humanities," you can say "a beautiful part of nature." Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize love and affection. They add beauty to our surroundings and make people feel happy.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and is somewhat unclear. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid filler words like "uh." Also, be more specific and structured in your response.

Example: Yes, many people love flowers, especially my sister. She enjoys gardening and has a beautiful flower garden at home.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors. Use correct articles and plural forms, and try to link your ideas smoothly.

Example: Actually, there aren't many flowers where I live because I live in the countryside. Also, there is not a wide variety of flowers around here.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and has some awkward phrasing. Try to be more concise and use correct word order. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photography and often take photos of flowers, especially roses and water lilies, which are my favorites.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words. Also, use plural forms correctly and avoid listing too many items without connectors.

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays, parties, ceremonies, and festivals because they believe flowers help express their feelings easily.

× Definitely, I like flowers because it's a symbol of love, affection and a great humanities.

✓ Definitely, I like flowers because they are symbols of love, affection, and great humanities.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'it's' (singular) to refer to multiple things (love, affection, and humanities), which requires a plural verb 'they are'. Also, 'a great humanities' is incorrect because 'humanities' is plural and uncountable here, so 'great humanities' without 'a' is correct.

× Actually everyone's love flowers, but among them my sister, uh, like most flowers and she also has a flowers garden.

✓ Actually, everyone loves flowers, but among them, my sister likes most flowers and she also has a flower garden.

The subject 'everyone' is singular and requires the verb 'loves' (third person singular). 'Like' should be 'likes' to agree with 'my sister'. 'Flowers garden' should be 'flower garden' as it is a compound noun where 'flower' acts as an adjective.

× Actually, there aren't a lot of flowers where I live and I live in a countryside, so there are not enough variety of flowers.

✓ Actually, there aren't a lot of flowers where I live and I live in the countryside, so there is not enough variety of flowers.

'Countryside' is a singular noun that requires the definite article 'the'. Also, 'variety' is singular and requires 'is' instead of 'are'.

× Definitely. I'm fond of photographing, so most of the time I love to take photos of flowers, among them rose and water Lily, which I like most to take pictures.

✓ Definitely. I'm fond of photographing, so most of the time I love to take photos of flowers, especially roses and water lilies, which I like most to photograph.

'Among them' is incorrectly used; 'especially' is better to specify particular flowers. 'Rose' and 'water Lily' should be pluralized as 'roses' and 'water lilies'. Also, 'like most to take pictures' is awkward; 'like most to photograph' is clearer.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others such as birthdays, party, ceremony, occasion or festivals.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on occasions such as birthdays, parties, ceremonies, or festivals.

'Such as' should be preceded by 'on occasions' to indicate the events when flowers are sent. Also, the nouns should be pluralized appropriately: 'parties', 'ceremonies'. The list should be connected properly with 'or' before the last item.