Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и грамматических ошибок, например, "It gave me more energy" лучше заменить на "They give me more energy". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because of their beautiful colors and shapes. They always brighten my day and give me more energy when I see them on balconies or in gardens. Therefore, I definitely enjoy having flowers around me.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более точные выражения, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Example: Yes, my mom loves flowers because she grows them on the balcony every year. I think she really adores them, although I'm not sure why she feels that way.

Suggestion: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит ошибки. Следует использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, а также связующие слова для улучшения связности.

Example: No, there are not many flowers near my house because I live in the center of Moscow, surrounded by modern buildings. However, I would like to have some flowers or a garden next to my home in the future.

Suggestion: Ответ нечеткий и содержит повторы. Следует отвечать более прямо и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также избегайте разговорных выражений типа "if I have a mood".

Example: I don't take photos of flowers very often, but sometimes I do it for my Instagram or social media when I feel like it.

Suggestion: Ответ неполный и содержит ошибки. Следует давать более развернутый ответ с использованием связующих слов и правильной грамматики.

Example: I don't think people in my country send flowers very often, although I sometimes see people carrying flowers on the streets. In my family, we usually don't send flowers to each other.

× It gave me more energy maybe when I see them on the balconies on the garden.

✓ It gives me more energy maybe when I see them on the balconies in the garden.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'gave' while the context suggests a habitual action, so the present tense 'gives' is appropriate. Also, 'on the garden' should be 'in the garden' due to preposition usage.

× It gave me more energy maybe when I see them on the balconies on the garden.

✓ It gives me more energy maybe when I see them on the balconies in the garden.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to 'the garden'; the correct preposition is 'in' because flowers are located within the garden area.

× Definitely it's my mom because she grows them on the balcony every year so I think she's really adore them but unfortunately I don't know why.

✓ Definitely it's my mom because she grows them on the balcony every year so I think she really adores them but unfortunately I don't know why.

The phrase 'she's really adore' is incorrect; 'she's' is a contraction for 'she is' or 'she has', which does not fit here. The correct form is 'she really adores' to match subject-verb agreement and tense.

× Honestly next to my house no, because I live in city in the center of Moscow so there are only some modern buildings and I don't have any gardens, flowers, but I would like to do them next to my home.

✓ Honestly, next to my house no, because I live in the city in the center of Moscow so there are only some modern buildings and I don't have any gardens or flowers, but I would like to have them next to my home.

The phrase 'I live in city' is missing the article 'the' before 'city'. Also, 'do them' is incorrect when referring to having flowers; 'have them' is appropriate. Additionally, 'gardens, flowers' should be connected with 'or' for clarity.

× Honestly next to my house no, because I live in city in the center of Moscow so there are only some modern buildings and I don't have any gardens, flowers, but I would like to do them next to my home.

✓ Honestly, next to my house no, because I live in the city in the center of Moscow so there are only some modern buildings and I don't have any gardens or flowers, but I would like to have them next to my home.

The preposition 'in' is correctly used with 'the city', but the article 'the' is missing. Also, 'do them' is incorrect; 'have them' is the correct verb phrase when referring to possessing flowers.

× Honestly, I don't think that it's too often, but maybe sometimes when I need to take a photo from my Instagram, from my social media, yes I can do it.

✓ Honestly, I don't think that it's too often, but maybe sometimes when I need to take a photo for my Instagram, from my social media, yes I can do it.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect when referring to posting photos on Instagram; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate purpose or destination.

× I don't think so actually because I can often see people on the streets with the flowers so maybe.

✓ I don't think so actually because I can often see people on the streets with flowers, so maybe.

The phrase 'with the flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' here is general, so the definite article 'the' should be omitted.

× But in my family where no.

✓ But in my family, no.

The phrase 'where no' is ungrammatical and unnecessary. The correct structure is simply 'But in my family, no.' to indicate negation.