Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors always catch my eye, and their fragrance is very pleasant. Whenever I pick flowers from my garden, it gives me a refreshing feeling and brightens my mood.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases reduce clarity. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, my mother loves flowers and is passionate about gardening. She chooses a variety of flowers because she often uses them for worship, and she finds their fragrance refreshing.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct plural forms and sentence structures. Also, avoid repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, there is a huge variety of flowers in my garden, and I feel very fortunate. The climate and environment here are perfect for growing many kinds of flowers, which make my garden look very attractive.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to form complete sentences and avoid fragmented phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be specific about your habits.

Example: Yes, I am fond of taking photos of beautiful scenery, including waterfalls and various flowers in my garden. I am curious to learn about new flower varieties, and my mother recommended that I take photos and upload them on my social media.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct plural forms and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Example: Yes, in my country, people often send flower bouquets to their close ones and family on special occasions because flowers are a beautiful way to express feelings. For example, weddings and birthday parties are usually decorated with fresh flowers, which add an elegant touch to the celebrations.

× Yes, of course I love flowers because they are vibrant colors, always catch my eye and their fragrance is very beautiful.

✓ Yes, of course I love flowers because they have vibrant colors, always catch my eye, and their fragrance is very beautiful.

The phrase 'they are vibrant colors' incorrectly uses 'are' with 'colors' as a predicate adjective. The correct expression is 'they have vibrant colors' to indicate possession of colors by flowers.

× Whenever I pick flower from my garden is provide me a great refreshing feeling and brighten my mood.

✓ Whenever I pick flowers from my garden, it provides me a great refreshing feeling and brightens my mood.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple flowers. Also, the verb should agree with the singular subject 'it' referring to the act of picking flowers, hence 'provides' and 'brightens'.

× My mother is very passionate about gardening and love to choose a variety of flowers from the garden.

✓ My mother is very passionate about gardening and loves to choose a variety of flowers from the garden.

The verb 'love' should be in third person singular form 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'My mother'.

× She feels a strong attachment to them because she often use flower for worship and also find refreshing whenever they smell the fragrance of flower gardening is.

✓ She feels a strong attachment to them because she often uses flowers for worship and also finds it refreshing whenever she smells the fragrance of flower gardening.

The verbs 'use' and 'find' need to be in third person singular form 'uses' and 'finds' to agree with 'she'. The pronouns 'they' and 'flower gardening is' are incorrectly used; 'she' should be used and the phrase corrected to 'the fragrance of flower gardening'.

× Yes, there are huge variety of flower in my garden and I feel very fortunate to have such a variety of flowers.

✓ Yes, there is a huge variety of flowers in my garden and I feel very fortunate to have such a variety of flowers.

The phrase 'there are huge variety' is incorrect because 'variety' is singular; it should be 'there is a huge variety'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'.

× The climate and environment here is perfect for growing nu numerous kind of flower which make my garden look very attractive and I am very fortunate to the environment and I have.

✓ The climate and environment here are perfect for growing numerous kinds of flowers which make my garden look very attractive and I am very fortunate to have this environment.

The compound subject 'climate and environment' requires plural verb 'are'. 'Nu numerous kind of flower' is corrected to 'numerous kinds of flowers'. The phrase 'I am very fortunate to the environment and I have' is corrected to 'I am very fortunate to have this environment' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I fond of taking photos of beautiful scenery, waterfalls as well as a variety of flower in my garden.

✓ Yes, I am fond of taking photos of beautiful scenery, waterfalls as well as a variety of flowers in my garden.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'fond'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'a variety of'.

× Always. I am very curious to know about new variety of flower and my mom recommended I mostly click these photos and upload on my social media and everywhere.

✓ I am always very curious to know about new varieties of flowers, and my mom recommended that I mostly click these photos and upload them on my social media and everywhere.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper connectors. 'Always.' is misplaced. 'New variety of flower' should be plural 'new varieties of flowers'. The phrase 'my mom recommended I mostly click' needs 'that' for clarity and 'upload on' should be 'upload them on'.

× In my country people often send flower bouquet to their close ones and family special occasion for because flower are the beautiful way to express their feeling.

✓ In my country, people often send flower bouquets to their close ones and family on special occasions because flowers are a beautiful way to express their feelings.

'Flower bouquet' should be plural 'flower bouquets'. The phrase 'family special occasion for' is incorrect and corrected to 'family on special occasions'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Are the beautiful way' corrected to 'are a beautiful way'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'.

× For example, embedding and birthday party are usually decorated with fresh flower which are added elegant touch to the celebration.

✓ For example, weddings and birthday parties are usually decorated with fresh flowers which add an elegant touch to the celebration.

'Embedding' is likely a typo for 'wedding'. Both 'wedding' and 'birthday party' should be plural. 'Fresh flower' should be plural 'fresh flowers'. 'Which are added' is incorrect; it should be 'which add'. 'Elegant touch' needs the article 'an'.