Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Verbesserungsvorschlag: Achten Sie auf die korrekte Grammatik, insbesondere bei der Verwendung von Hilfsverben und Subjekt-Verb-Übereinstimmung. Verwenden Sie außerdem klarere Satzstrukturen und vermeiden Sie kleine Fehler, um die Natürlichkeit zu erhöhen.

Example: Of course, I love flowers, especially lavender. It not only helps me reduce stress but also improves my sleep quality when I smell it.

Suggestion: Verbesserungsvorschlag: Vermeiden Sie unklare oder unvollständige Sätze und achten Sie auf idiomatische Ausdrücke. Zum Beispiel sollte 'green finger' korrekt als 'green fingers' verwendet werden. Stellen Sie sicher, dass alle Sätze vollständig und verständlich sind.

Example: Yes, my mom is a big fan of flowers. She has planted a variety of them on our balcony. She is very skilled at gardening and I always call her for advice because she has green fingers.

Suggestion: Verbesserungsvorschlag: Achten Sie auf die Satzstruktur und vermeiden Sie unvollständige Sätze. Verwenden Sie außerdem verbindende Wörter, um die Antwort flüssiger zu gestalten.

Example: There aren't many flowers where I live because I live in the capital city of Taiwan. I think this is because flowers are hard to take care of and require a lot of time and money.

Suggestion: Verbesserungsvorschlag: Achten Sie auf Grammatik und Satzbau, insbesondere bei der Verwendung von Zeitformen und Pluralformen. Verwenden Sie außerdem klare und vollständige Sätze.

Example: No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life because there aren't many flowers around my place, and it's hard to find beautiful ones. However, my mom likes to take photos of flowers when she visits city gardens.

Suggestion: Verbesserungsvorschlag: Verbessern Sie die Grammatik, insbesondere die Verwendung von Zeitformen und Passivkonstruktionen. Verwenden Sie außerdem klarere Formulierungen und vermeiden Sie Wiederholungen.

Example: I think more and more people are sending flowers to others now compared to before. This trend is influenced by dramas where sending flowers represents love and respect to significant others.

× It's not only helps me to reduce my stress but also improve the quality of sleeping by smelling the flower.

✓ It not only helps me to reduce my stress but also improves the quality of sleep by smelling the flower.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's' (it is) before 'not only helps', which is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'It not only helps... but also improves...'. Additionally, 'sleeping' should be the noun 'sleep' here. The verbs 'helps' and 'improves' must agree in form and parallel structure.

× She is very good at it and I always called.

✓ She is very good at it and I always call her.

The phrase 'I always called' incorrectly uses past tense 'called' when the adverb 'always' indicates a habitual action, which requires present tense 'call'. Also, the object 'her' is missing after 'call'.

× She has a green finger.

✓ She has green fingers.

The idiomatic expression is 'green fingers' (plural) to describe someone good at gardening. Using singular 'a green finger' is incorrect.

× She planted a variety of flowers on the balcony of my house.

✓ She planted a variety of flowers on the balcony of my house.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error detected.

× Now there aren't a lot of flowers where I live because I live in the capital city of Taiwan.

✓ Now there aren't many flowers where I live because I live in the capital city of Taiwan.

'A lot of' is less appropriate in negative sentences; 'many' is preferred with countable nouns in negative contexts.

× I think the reason why there aren't a lot of flowers is because flowers are hard to take care of and need to spend a lot of time and money to.

✓ I think the reason why there aren't a lot of flowers is that flowers are hard to take care of and require a lot of time and money.

The phrase 'need to spend a lot of time and money to' is incomplete and awkward. It should be 'require a lot of time and money'. Also, 'is because' is redundant after 'the reason why'; 'is that' is correct.

× No, because there aren't a lot of flowers surrounding my place and it is really hard to find a beautiful flowers.

✓ No, because there aren't many flowers surrounding my place and it is really hard to find beautiful flowers.

'A lot of' is less appropriate in negative sentences; 'many' is preferred. Also, 'a beautiful flowers' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'flowers'; it should be 'beautiful flowers' without 'a'.

× But my mom liked to take the photos of flowers she usually go to the gardens in the cities at.

✓ But my mom likes to take photos of flowers; she usually goes to gardens in the city.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'liked' should be present tense 'likes' to match habitual action; 'go' should be 'goes' for third person singular; 'the photos of flowers' should be 'photos of flowers' without 'the'; 'in the cities at' is incorrect preposition usage and word order; corrected to 'in the city'.

× I think there are more and more people send flowers to others right now than before.

✓ I think there are more and more people sending flowers to others right now than before.

The verb 'send' should be in the '-ing' form 'sending' after 'people' to indicate ongoing action or trend.

× It is because they influenced by the drama of sending flowers to represent their love and respect to the significant others.

✓ It is because they are influenced by the drama of sending flowers to represent their love and respect to significant others.

The verb 'influenced' needs the auxiliary 'are' to form the passive voice 'are influenced'. Also, 'the significant others' should be 'significant others' without 'the'.