Flowers— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you love flowers?
Candidate
Yes, obviously, I think every girl would love to have a bouquet of flowers. I usually give flowers to my sister and also my mother because I think they symbolize my love and adorations for them.
Examiner
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Candidate
Everyone around me, especially the girls, really love flowers because I, as I mentioned before, flowers can really easily symbolize uh, uh, adoration and affection to the other party. So by giving the flowers to other people, it express.
Examiner
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Candidate
I come from a mountainous town so it's really hard uh for flowers to grow. Usually when I was a try I will only see the white flowers, not really fancy or extravagant flowers that I can see everywhere today.
Examiner
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Candidate
Yes, of course I think I'm the girl. I'm that girl who will take photos of every unique and beautiful flower that I encounter. I think around me only me and one of my girlfriend, umm girlfriends have this habit.
Examiner
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Candidate
In my opinion, the gesture of giving flowers to other people is common around the world. So even in my country, although a lot of people don't really appreciate their beauty of flowers, they still give flowers to each other as a gesture of appreciation and also in special occasions.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại như "love" và "adorations" không chính xác về ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn và câu trả lời ngắn gọn, tránh dài dòng.
Example: Yes, I really like flowers. I often give bouquets to my sister and mother because they represent my affection and appreciation for them.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng tiếng lắp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Ngoài ra, hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động.
Example: Yes, many people I know, especially women, love flowers because they symbolize affection. For example, my friend always gives flowers to her family on special occasions.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "when I was a try" và nói rõ ràng hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc mạch lạc, dùng từ nối và từ vựng phù hợp để mô tả chi tiết hơn.
Example: I come from a mountainous town where it's difficult for many flowers to grow. Usually, I only see simple white flowers, unlike the colorful and fancy ones found in cities.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và nói lắp. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng từ nối để liên kết ý. Hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời sinh động hơn.
Example: Yes, I love taking photos of unique and beautiful flowers I see. In fact, only my close friend and I share this hobby.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách dùng từ nối để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ như "their beauty of flowers". Hãy dùng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn.
Example: In my opinion, giving flowers is a common gesture worldwide. In my country, although not everyone admires their beauty, people still exchange flowers to show appreciation, especially during special occasions.
Grammar
× Everyone around me, especially the girls, really love flowers because I, as I mentioned before, flowers can really easily symbolize uh, uh, adoration and affection to the other party.
✓ Everyone around me, especially the girls, really loves flowers because, as I mentioned before, flowers can really easily symbolize uh, uh, adoration and affection to the other party.
The subject 'Everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love' to agree in number. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.
× So by giving the flowers to other people, it express.
✓ So by giving the flowers to other people, it expresses.
The verb 'express' should be in the third person singular present tense 'expresses' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a verb form error involving the present participle and subject-verb agreement.
× Usually when I was a try I will only see the white flowers, not really fancy or extravagant flowers that I can see everywhere today.
✓ Usually when I was a child I would only see white flowers, not really fancy or extravagant flowers that I can see everywhere today.
The phrase 'when I was a try' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was a child' or similar. Also, 'will only see' is incorrect for past habitual action; 'would only see' is appropriate. This is a past tense usage issue.
× I think around me only me and one of my girlfriend, umm girlfriends have this habit.
✓ I think around me only me and one of my girlfriends have this habit.
The word 'girlfriend' should be plural 'girlfriends' because it refers to one among multiple girlfriends. This is a singular and plural issue.
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