Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and ensure your sentences are complete and clear. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'because of flowers', you can say 'They brighten up my home with their pleasant smell and beautiful appearance.'

Example: Yes, I absolutely love flowers. They brighten up my home with their pleasant smell and beautiful appearance, making the room look more inviting and cheerful.

Suggestion: Focus on clarity and correct word usage. For example, 'Flyers' should be 'flowers', and 'different class' should be 'different classes' or 'varieties'. Also, use linking words like 'therefore' or 'so' properly to connect ideas. Try to keep sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, one of my closest friends loves flowers. She always feels happy when she receives flowers as gifts. Therefore, on her birthday, all of us plan to gift her bouquets made from different varieties to brighten her mood.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar. For example, say 'The climate in my city is very nice and helps the plants to bloom.' Also, use linking words like 'for example' to introduce examples. Avoid minor errors like 'my cities' instead of 'my city'.

Example: Yes, there are lots of flowers where I live. The climate in my city is very nice and helps the plants to bloom. For example, roses, lilies, sunflowers, and lotus flowers are commonly found here.

Suggestion: Avoid contradictory or unclear phrases like 'ill delighted'. Instead, use positive expressions such as 'really delighted'. Also, use linking words like 'because' properly and keep sentences clear and concise.

Example: Yes, I often take photographs of flowers during my daily walks because they are colorful and vibrant, which really delights me and lifts my mood.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use more precise vocabulary. Instead of 'positive vibes', you can say 'good wishes' or 'affection'. Also, use linking words like 'for example' to introduce instances.

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others as a token of love and good wishes. For example, during gatherings and wedding ceremonies, flowers are offered to loved ones to show affection and care.

× They umm, because of flowers I can decorate my house and because of them I'm There is a pleasant smell and the room looks beautiful.

✓ They, umm, because of flowers I can decorate my house and because of them there is a pleasant smell and the room looks beautiful.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm There is' which is grammatically incorrect. The correct phrase is 'there is' to indicate the existence of a pleasant smell. 'There is' is used to state the presence of something in a place.

× Yes, one of my closest friend loves flowers.

✓ Yes, one of my closest friends loves flowers.

The phrase 'one of my closest friend' is incorrect because 'one of' should be followed by a plural noun. The correct form is 'one of my closest friends' to indicate one individual from a group.

× She is always excited and happy when she receives Flyers as a gift from someone.

✓ She is always excited and happy when she receives flowers as a gift from someone.

The word 'Flyers' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'flowers'. 'Flyers' refers to pamphlets or leaflets, not plants.

× So during her birthday, we all friends plan to gift her various types of bouquet made from different class to bright her mood brighten.

✓ So during her birthday, we all friends plan to gift her various types of bouquets made from different classes to brighten her mood.

Several errors here: 'types of bouquet' should be plural 'types of bouquets' because 'types' implies multiple; 'different class' should be 'different classes' to match plural; 'bright her mood brighten' is incorrect, the correct phrase is 'to brighten her mood' using the infinitive verb form after 'to'.

× The climate in my city is very nice and helps bloom or the growth of the plant.

✓ The climate in my city is very nice and helps the bloom or the growth of the plants.

The phrase 'helps bloom or the growth of the plant' is missing the article 'the' before 'bloom' and 'plant' should be plural 'plants' to refer generally to multiple plants.

× The various types of flowers found in my cities are roses, lilies, sunflowers, and Lotus.

✓ The various types of flowers found in my city are roses, lilies, sunflowers, and lotus.

'Cities' should be singular 'city' if referring to one city. Also, 'Lotus' should be lowercase 'lotus' to match the other flower names unless it is a proper noun.

× Yes, I do take lots of photographs of flowers during my day-to-day journey because looking at them makes me feel ill delighted and they are so colorful and vibrant.

✓ Yes, I do take lots of photographs of flowers during my day-to-day journey because looking at them makes me feel delighted and they are so colorful and vibrant.

The phrase 'ill delighted' is incorrect. The correct expression is simply 'delighted' to express happiness or pleasure.