Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng các câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phong phú hơn để diễn đạt cảm xúc một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

Example: Yes, I absolutely love flowers. Their beautiful colors and pleasant scents always brighten my day and lift my mood.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn.

Example: Many people around me like flowers, but my mom loves them the most. She has a large flower garden where she spends a lot of time caring for different kinds of plants.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác, đồng thời tránh câu quá dài và phức tạp.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, especially around the trees. The trees provide shade all year round, which helps people feel cooler on hot days.

Suggestion: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng và thêm lý do hoặc hoàn cảnh để câu trả lời thêm phong phú.

Example: I don't often take photos of flowers in my daily life, but when I have free time and feel tired, I like to take pictures of flowers to relax.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy thêm các ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Example: Absolutely, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays or to congratulate them. Sometimes, they also send flowers on ordinary days to show their care.

× I am addicted to flower.

✓ I am addicted to flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower.

× I love flowers smell.

✓ I love the smell of flowers.

The phrase 'flowers smell' is incorrect; it should be 'the smell of flowers' to correctly express the idea.

× I love colorful flower.

✓ I love colorful flowers.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple flowers.

× Flower make me feel better, make me feel happy.

✓ Flowers make me feel better and make me feel happy.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' and the verb 'make' agrees with plural subject 'flowers'. Also, 'and' is added to connect the two clauses properly.

× On people around me also like flowers, but I think my mom love flowers the best.

✓ The people around me also like flowers, but I think my mom loves flowers the best.

'On people' is incorrect; it should be 'The people'. Also, 'mom love' should be 'mom loves' to agree with third person singular.

× She has a big garden of flower, the garden.

✓ She has a big garden of flowers, the garden.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to many flowers in the garden.

× There are numbers of tree where I live the flower because tree provides all season to breast and it makes people feel cool in hot day.

✓ There are a number of trees where I live with flowers because trees provide shade all season and make people feel cool on hot days.

'Numbers of tree' should be 'a number of trees' (plural). 'Tree' should be plural 'trees' to agree with the subject. 'Breast' is incorrect; it should be 'shade'. 'In hot day' should be 'on hot days'.

× I don't take further flower in my daily life so much but when I have time and I feel tired I will take photos of flowers to.

✓ I don't take many photos of flowers in my daily life, but when I have time and feel tired, I will take photos of flowers too.

'Further flower' is incorrect; it should be 'many photos of flowers'. 'To' at the end should be 'too' meaning 'also'.

× Absolutely, just people in my country often send flowers to other when special day like birthday or to congratulation on.

✓ Absolutely, people in my country often send flowers to others on special days like birthdays or to congratulate someone.

'Just people' is unnecessary; 'others' should be plural. 'Special day' should be plural 'special days'. 'To congratulation on' is incorrect; it should be 'to congratulate someone'.

× Also in normal day people send.

✓ Also, on normal days, people send flowers.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'flowers' completes the sentence. 'Normal day' should be plural 'normal days' and preposition 'on' is needed.