Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时时态不一致，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意时态一致性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I definitely love flowers. I enjoy their fragrance and appearance. For example, when I am surrounded by jasmine, I feel delighted and relaxed.

Suggestion: 表达不够准确，“all of my families are flower flowers”语法错误且重复。建议使用正确的表达并丰富细节。

Example: Yes, all my family members love flowers, especially my mom. She is a big fan of roses, and my father buys flowers for her every weekend.

Suggestion: 句子结构不完整，最后一句缺少宾语。建议注意句子完整性和连贯性。

Example: Yes, there are many flowers near my apartment because there is a park opposite our window. Every day when I go back home, I can see and smell these flowers.

Suggestion: 语法错误较多，句子冗长且不连贯。建议简化句子，注意时态和主谓一致。

Example: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I pass by the park. I usually post them on my WeChat moments, and my friends and relatives like them.

Suggestion: 表达不够准确，词汇使用不当，如“polite manner and friendly”。建议使用更地道的表达并注意复数形式。

Example: People in my country often send flowers to others because they think it's a good way to show politeness and friendliness. Especially on Valentine's Day or Teachers' Day, they send roses and sunflowers to others.

× When I surrounded by Jasmine, I'd feel delighted and relaxed.

✓ When I am surrounded by Jasmine, I feel delighted and relaxed.

这里缺少be动词，正确的表达应该是被动语态的现在时态，即"am surrounded"。此外，句子描述的是一般现在时的感受，应该用一般现在时态的"feel"。

× all of my families are flower flowers, especially my mom.

✓ all of my family are flower lovers, especially my mom.

"families"应为不可数名词"family"，表示家庭成员整体。"flower flowers"是重复错误，应改为"flower lovers"表示喜欢花的人。

× my father will buy flowers for my mom every weekend.

✓ my father buys flowers for my mom every weekend.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时而非将来时"will buy"。

× there are a lot of flowers near my apartment because there is a park opposite our window and every day I would go back home I can see these flowers and smell the.

✓ there are a lot of flowers near my apartment because there is a park opposite our window, and every day when I go back home, I can see these flowers and smell them.

句子缺少逗号分隔从句，"would go back home"应改为一般现在时"go back home"，因为描述的是习惯动作。"smell the"缺少宾语，应补充为"smell them"。

× I always take photos of flowers when I passing by the park and I almost post them on my WeChat moments every time and my friend and my relatives were like.

✓ I always take photos of flowers when I am passing by the park, and I almost always post them on my WeChat moments, and my friends and my relatives like them.

"when I passing"缺少be动词，应为"when I am passing"。"almost post"应为"almost always post"更符合习惯表达。"my friend and my relatives were like"结构不完整，应改为"my friends and my relatives like them"。

× People in our country often send flowers to others because they think it's a good way to show their polite manner and friendly.

✓ People in our country often send flowers to others because they think it's a good way to show their politeness and friendliness.

"polite manner"和"friendly"用法不当，应改为名词形式"politeness"和"friendliness"，表示礼貌和友好。

× Especially during the Valentine days or teachers days they will send roses and sunflowers to other.

✓ Especially during Valentine's Day or Teachers' Day, they will send roses and sunflowers to others.

"Valentine days"应为单数所有格"Valentine's Day"，"teachers days"应为复数所有格"Teachers' Day"。"to other"应为复数宾格"to others"。