Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use plural form 'blossoms' instead of 'blossom' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'best relation' and instead say 'symbolize strong bonds between friends and couples'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Certainly, I adore blossoms because they have bright colours and pleasant smells. Moreover, they help me decorate my room beautifully. Flowers often symbolize strong bonds between friends and couples.

Suggestion: Be careful with word choice; 'realities' is incorrect here. Use 'relatives' instead. Also, maintain subject-verb agreement, e.g., 'she waters flowers every day'. Use linking words like 'for example' to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I know many people who adore flowers, including my friends, relatives, and colleagues. For example, my sister loves blossoms a lot; she has decorated her room with blue blooms and waters the flowers every day.

Suggestion: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Instead of 'my house is building a field', say 'my house is near a field'. Use correct verb forms like 'I watch flowers every day'. Use linking words such as 'for instance' to add details.

Example: I come from a small village, and my house is near a field. There are many flowers there with vibrant colours like red, pink, yellow, orange, and white. For instance, I watch the flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

Suggestion: Use more natural phrasing such as 'As I mentioned earlier'. Also, say 'I prefer to send snaps of red flowers' instead of 'give more preference'. Use linking words like 'because' appropriately.

Example: As I mentioned earlier, I adore flowers a lot and I take photos of them daily using Snapchat. I prefer to send snaps of red flowers because red is my favourite colour.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use plural 'others' and correct verb forms. Avoid sentence fragments. Use linking words like 'for example' to clarify occasions.

Example: Certainly, people in my country often send flowers to others because it helps convey feelings and build strong relationships. For example, flowers are sent during festivals, birthdays, and other special occasions to express feelings and good wishes.

× Certainly, I adore blossom because they have bright color and smells.

✓ Certainly, I adore blossoms because they have bright colors and smells.

The word 'blossom' should be plural 'blossoms' to match the plural pronoun 'they'. Also, 'color' and 'smells' should be plural as they refer to multiple attributes of multiple blossoms.

× She has decorated her rooms with Blues blooms and she watering flowers every day.

✓ She has decorated her rooms with blue blooms and she waters flowers every day.

The phrase 'she watering' is incorrect; it should be 'she waters' to agree with the subject and tense. Also, 'Blues' should be 'blue' as an adjective describing 'blooms'.

× I come from a small village and my house is building a field.

✓ I come from a small village and my house is near a field.

The phrase 'my house is building a field' is incorrect and unclear. It likely means the house is near or beside a field. 'Building' is a noun or verb but does not fit here.

× There are number of flowers available there with vibrant colors like red, pink, yellow, orange, white etcetera and I watching flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

✓ There are a number of flowers available there with vibrant colors like red, pink, yellow, orange, white etcetera and I watch flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

The phrase 'There are number of flowers' needs the article 'a' before 'number'. Also, 'I watching' should be 'I watch' to be grammatically correct in present tense.

× I watching flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

✓ I watch flowers every day to keep them healthy and vibrant.

The verb 'watching' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is 'watch' to match the simple present tense for habitual action.

× I take photos of flowers in my daily life while I'm using Snapchat.

✓ I take photos of flowers in my daily life while using Snapchat.

The phrase 'while I'm using Snapchat' is better expressed as 'while using Snapchat' to avoid unnecessary pronoun and verb form.

× I give more preference to send snap of red flowers because red is my favorite color.

✓ I give more preference to sending snaps of red flowers because red is my favorite color.

The phrase 'to send snap' should be 'to sending snaps' to correctly use the gerund after 'preference' and pluralize 'snap' as 'snaps'.

× Certainly, people in my country often send flowers to other because it helps to convey feelings and help them to create a strong relationship and the flowers send by people during festival, birthdays and other special occasions to express their feelings and. Good wishes.

✓ Certainly, people in my country often send flowers to others because it helps to convey feelings and helps them to create strong relationships. Flowers are sent by people during festivals, birthdays, and other special occasions to express their feelings and good wishes.

The word 'other' should be plural 'others'. The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'it'. 'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar, including passive voice usage and article use.