Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cavabınızı daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün "uh" kimi fasilələri azaltmalı və cümlələrinizi daha qısa və dəqiq ifadə etməlisiniz. Məsələn, ağ çiçəkləri sevdiyinizi və onların gözəlliyi ilə qoxusunu vurğulaya bilərsiniz.

Example: Yes, I love flowers, especially white ones because they look beautiful and have a pleasant fragrance.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurmaq üçün diqqət yetirin. Məsələn, "I always me and my dad will always buy" ifadəsi qarışıqdır. Sadə və aydın ifadələrdən istifadə edin.

Example: Yes, my mom loves flowers. On special occasions like her birthday, my dad and I always buy flowers for her because they are the best gift.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və məntiqli etmək üçün təkrarlardan qaçın və daha dəqiq ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, "usually" sözünü bir dəfə istifadə edin və "weird types" yerinə daha uyğun söz seçin.

Example: It depends on the area, but generally, you can see many different kinds of flowers around, including some unusual varieties.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha axıcı etmək üçün təkrarlardan qaçın və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, "especially when" ifadəsini bir dəfə istifadə edin və cümlələri daha qısa edin.

Example: Yes, taking photos of flowers is my favorite hobby. I especially like to photograph unusual or colorful flowers to share on my social media.

Suggestion: Cümlələrinizi daha düzgün və aydın ifadə etmək üçün qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və daha dəqiq ifadələrdən istifadə edin. Məsələn, "appreciating for" ifadəsi səhvdir, onun yerinə "to show appreciation" istifadə edin.

Example: Yes, on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries, people often send flowers to show appreciation or celebrate.

× I shall prefer white flowers because they are oh, they look pretty and also it smells so, uh, good, uh.

✓ I prefer white flowers because they look pretty and also smell good.

The phrase 'shall prefer' is incorrect here; 'prefer' is a stative verb and does not use 'shall'. Also, 'it smells' should be 'they smell' to agree with the plural noun 'flowers'. The sentence is simplified for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, for example my mom she's in love with flowers and when it's a special day or it's her birthday I always me and my dad will always buy flowers for her because it's the best gift for her.

✓ Yes, for example, my mom is in love with flowers and when it's a special day or her birthday, my dad and I always buy flowers for her because it's the best gift for her.

The phrase 'I always me and my dad will always buy' is incorrect. The correct pronoun order is 'my dad and I'. Also, 'she's' is better replaced with 'is' for clarity. The sentence is restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× Usually it depends on the place where you go, but usually when you go out you can easily see different kinds of flowers everywhere because like especially weird types.

✓ Usually, it depends on the place you go, but when you go out, you can easily see different kinds of flowers everywhere, especially unusual types.

The phrase 'because like especially weird types' is awkward and incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary and 'weird' is better replaced with 'unusual' for appropriateness. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correct preposition use.

× Yes, and I can say it's my favorite hobby to take a picture of flowers and when especially when I see something unusual or colorful flowers, I definitely take a picture because I want to post them on my social media.

✓ Yes, I can say that taking pictures of flowers is my favorite hobby, and especially when I see something unusual or colorful, I definitely take a picture because I want to post it on my social media.

The phrase 'it's my favorite hobby to take a picture' is awkward; 'taking pictures' is the correct gerund form to express a hobby. Also, 'them' should be 'it' referring to 'a picture'. The sentence is restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× When's the special occasion such as birthdays, anniversary or something other? Yes, people send flowers for, appreciating for or celebrating their birthdays.

✓ On special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, or other events, yes, people send flowers to appreciate or celebrate.

The phrase 'When's the special occasion' is incorrect; 'On special occasions' is correct. Also, 'appreciating for or celebrating their birthdays' is awkward; 'to appreciate or celebrate' is correct. The sentence is rephrased for grammatical correctness and clarity.