Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免使用口头语如“Umm”和“uh”，使表达更自然流畅。同时，句子结构可以更完整，避免断句不连贯。可以增加一些具体细节说明为什么讨厌花，比如过敏的具体影响。

Example: No, I don't love flowers because I am allergic to pollen, which causes me to sneeze and have itchy eyes. Therefore, I never buy or receive flowers from others.

Suggestion: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，如“because”、“so”。另外，“a kind of life”表达不够准确，可以用更自然的表达方式。

Example: Yes, my mom loves flowers because she believes they bring life and beauty. She often plants them in her garden so that she can feel relaxed and happy.

Suggestion: 回答内容丰富，但语法和表达有些小错误，如“a city famous as flower city”应为“a city famous as the Flower City”。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: Yes, I live in Guangzhou, which is famous as the Flower City. There are many kinds of flowers blooming in different seasons, and people here really love flowers.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，如“blowing blows blooming”。应避免重复并注意时态一致。句子结构可以更清晰。

Example: No, I don't take photos of flowers because I dislike them and usually don't pay attention to flowers blooming in parks or streets. However, my mom loves flowers and often takes pictures of them.

Suggestion: 回答内容基本完整，但句子之间缺少连接词，导致表达不够连贯。可以用“for example”或“such as”来引出例子，使表达更自然。

Example: It depends on the situation. For example, people often send flowers during special festivals such as Valentine's Day and Mother's Day as a way to express their good wishes.

× Or uh, never send flowers by other person.

✓ Or uh, never send flowers by other people.

这里的“other person”应使用复数形式“other people”，因为表示不特定的其他人，复数更合适。

× There are different kind of flowers in different seasons and people in this city love flowers too.

✓ There are different kinds of flowers in different seasons and people in this city love flowers too.

“different kind”应为复数形式“different kinds”，因为指多种不同的花。

× But my mom love flowers and she always took pictures of flowers.

✓ But my mom loves flowers and she always takes pictures of flowers.

主语是第三人称单数“my mom”，动词应加-s，且时态应与上下文一致，使用一般现在时“loves”和“takes”。