Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is good but try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use plural form 'flowers' and correct articles. Also, try to make your sentences more natural and concise by combining ideas and using linking words.

Example: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses because of their beautiful fragrance and vibrant colors. My favorite color is red, so I prefer red roses, which also symbolize love.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words like 'flower flower' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, my mom loves flowers so much that she started her own flower shop near our hometown.

Suggestion: Try to complete your sentences and avoid redundancy. Use plural forms correctly and add linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, including roses, lilies, and rhododendrons. Among them, roses are the most popular because they come in various colors and varieties.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and word choice, for example, use 'nostalgic feeling' or 'a feeling of nostalgia'. Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I do love'. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of nature, especially flowers, because they are charming and evoke a feeling of nostalgia. Capturing these moments is very enjoyable for me.

Suggestion: Correct singular/plural forms and clarify your ideas. For example, use 'flowers' instead of 'flower' and 'gift flowers to bodies' is unclear; perhaps you mean 'gift flowers at funerals'. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, flowers are very popular in my country. People often bring flowers when visiting someone in the hospital, and they also give flowers as gifts during funerals.

× Yes, definitely I do love flower.

✓ Yes, definitely I do love flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the speaker is talking about flowers in general, not a single flower. In English, when referring to things in general, the plural form is used.

× I love the fragrance of flower.

✓ I love the fragrance of flowers.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the fragrance comes from flowers in general, not just one flower.

× The my most favorite flower is rose as it is red in color.

✓ My most favorite flower is the rose as it is red in color.

The phrase 'The my' is incorrect; only one article or possessive pronoun should be used. Also, 'rose' as a specific flower should be preceded by 'the' when talking about it generally as a species.

× We can find varieties of color in rose but my most favorite is red as it is my favorite color.

✓ We can find varieties of colors in roses but my most favorite is red as it is my favorite color.

'Varieties' should be followed by plural 'colors' because there are multiple colors. Also, 'rose' should be plural 'roses' when referring to the flower in general.

× It also symbolize love so I do love.

✓ It also symbolizes love so I do love it.

The verb 'symbolize' should be in third person singular form 'symbolizes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, the sentence is incomplete without 'it' at the end.

× Yes, definitely my mom.

✓ Yes, definitely my mom does.

The answer is incomplete; it should include the verb 'does' to complete the sentence in response to the question.

× My mom loves the flower so much that she started her own flower flower shop near in my hometown.

✓ My mom loves flowers so much that she started her own flower shop near my hometown.

'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. Also, 'flower flower shop' is a repetition; only one 'flower' is needed. The preposition 'in' after 'near' is unnecessary.

× Yes, there are lots of flowers where I live such as roses, Lily, rhododendron and even more.

✓ Yes, there are lots of flowers where I live such as roses, lilies, rhododendrons and even more.

The names of flowers should be plural when listing multiple types: 'lily' to 'lilies' and 'rhododendron' to 'rhododendrons'.

× As I said it earlier, it is available in different colors and its variety is.

✓ As I said earlier, it is available in different colors and has many varieties.

The phrase 'As I said it earlier' is incorrect; 'it' should be omitted. The sentence ending 'and its variety is' is incomplete and needs to be rephrased for clarity.

× I do love taking pictures of nature, especially flowers as they are more charming and provide me the feeling of nostalgic.

✓ I do love taking pictures of nature, especially flowers as they are more charming and provide me with a feeling of nostalgia.

The phrase 'feeling of nostalgic' is incorrect; 'nostalgic' is an adjective, but a noun 'nostalgia' is needed here. Also, 'provide me the feeling' should be 'provide me with a feeling'.

× People often prefer flower when they are visiting someone who is sick in the hospital or they even gift in bodies as a present.

✓ People often prefer flowers when they are visiting someone who is sick in the hospital or they even give flowers as a present.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. The phrase 'gift in bodies' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'give flowers'. Also, 'gift' is a noun here but should be replaced with the verb 'give'.