Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，建议注意主谓一致和句子结构，避免冗长和重复。

Example: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize love and friendship. Receiving a bouquet always makes people feel happy and refreshed.

Suggestion: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，建议简化句子结构，明确表达意思，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Example: Yes, my friend Jungle loves flowers. He taught me a lot about their meanings. I still remember the first flower he gave me as a symbol of his good wishes.

Suggestion: 回答中描述不够具体，句子结构有些混乱，建议使用更准确的词汇和连接词，丰富细节描述。

Example: I live on a campus filled with many flowers. Walking along the alley, I feel refreshed by the greenery. The purple and red flowers especially brighten up the surroundings.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确，建议注意词汇使用和句子逻辑，避免模糊表达。

Example: Generally, I don't take photos of flowers or nature. Instead, I prefer to remember their beauty with my eyes and enjoy the moment without using a smartphone.

Suggestion: 回答中语法和表达不完整，建议简化句子，明确表达送花的场合和意义。

Example: Yes, in China, people often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries. Flowers are a perfect gift to express best wishes.

× I love flowers definitely because I think flowers is a symbol of romantic love, friendship and sometimes everyone will feel pretty refreshed and happy when they receive a bouquet is a symbol of happiness.

✓ I definitely love flowers because I think flowers are a symbol of romantic love, friendship, and sometimes everyone feels pretty refreshed and happy when they receive a bouquet, which is a symbol of happiness.

flowers是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are；句中有多个并列成分，需用逗号分隔；句子结构不完整，缺少连接词which引导定语从句。

× Well my friend Jungle who definitely is a person rolling 2 flowers and I know a lot of things about the meaning of flowers from him and I still remember my first flower was given by him expressing his wishes about.

✓ Well, my friend Jungle definitely is a person who grows flowers, and I know a lot about the meaning of flowers from him. I still remember my first flower was given by him, expressing his wishes.

rolling 2 flowers应为growing flowers，rolling用法错误；句子过长且缺少连接词，需拆分成两个句子；表达更清晰。

× Well, now I live in a campus where a lot of flowers are around me. Every time I walk on the alley, I will feel pretty refreshed and happy seeing greenery around me. At the same time there are many flowers and a purple and red one which brighten up.

✓ Well, now I live on a campus where a lot of flowers are around me. Every time I walk along the alley, I feel pretty refreshed and happy seeing greenery around me. At the same time, there are many flowers, including purple and red ones, which brighten up the place.

live in a campus应为live on a campus；walk on the alley应为walk along the alley；purple and red one应为purple and red ones，保持复数一致；句子结构需调整使表达更自然。

× Generally speaking, I'm not the kind of person who takes photos of flowers and natural sceneries. I try to remember them visually and appreciate them. It's a beautiful view and I think without smartphone I can feel the interview better.

✓ Generally speaking, I'm not the kind of person who takes photos of flowers and natural scenery. I try to remember them visually and appreciate them. It's a beautiful view, and I think without a smartphone I can feel the environment better.

natural sceneries应为natural scenery，scenery是不可数名词；without smartphone前应加不定冠词a；interview用词错误，应为environment。

× Yes, the people in China generally send flowers to someone who cherish on some occasions like birthdays or anniversaries, it's a perfect choice as a gift to someone expressing your best wishes, such as someone go to.

✓ Yes, people in China generally send flowers to someone they cherish on occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. It's a perfect choice as a gift to express your best wishes, such as when someone goes away.

someone who cherish应为someone they cherish，代词错误；cherish后不接on，应直接接宾语；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整表达；such as someone go to表达不清，改为such as when someone goes away更合适。