Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi Anda bisa membuatnya lebih alami dan efektif dengan menghindari pengulangan dan menambahkan detail yang lebih spesifik. Cobalah untuk menggabungkan kalimat agar lebih ringkas dan gunakan variasi kosakata.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up my home and create a pleasant atmosphere. For instance, I have a collection of orchids and roses that add color and fragrance to my living room.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan alami. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan tambahkan detail spesifik tentang koleksi bunga teman Anda.

Example: Yes, my friend Anna loves flowers a lot. She has a large collection in her room, including roses, lilies, and baby's breath, which she carefully arranges to decorate her space.

Suggestion: Perbaiki kesalahan kata dan tata bahasa, serta gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih logis. Jelaskan dengan lebih spesifik tentang lingkungan tempat tinggal Anda.

Example: I don't see many flowers around where I live, but there are plenty of plants, so the area is quite green, although it lacks colorful flowers.

Suggestion: Gabungkan kalimat agar lebih alami dan perbaiki tata bahasa. Tambahkan alasan yang lebih spesifik mengapa Anda suka memotret bunga.

Example: I don't take photos of flowers every day, but when I see particularly beautiful ones, I like to capture them to keep in my gallery because they brighten my mood.

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar lebih jelas dan koheren. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menghubungkan ide dan berikan contoh yang lebih spesifik.

Example: People in my country don't often send flowers as gifts. Instead, they prefer giving homemade food or traditional snacks during special occasions like celebrations or visits, as sharing food is considered more meaningful.

× I do my friend named Anna they she love flowers so much that she collects flowers in her room.

✓ I do. My friend named Anna, she loves flowers so much that she collects flowers in her room.

The original sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and punctuation. 'She love' should be 'she loves' because 'she' is third person singular. Also, the sentence is a run-on and needs to be split for clarity.

× She have lot of collection of flowers different type of flowers like roses, lilies, baby breath.

✓ She has a lot of collections of different types of flowers like roses, lilies, and baby breath.

The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'She'. Also, 'lot of collection' should be 'a lot of collections' or 'a large collection'. 'Different type' should be plural 'different types'.

× I don't think so, but there are a lot of plans where I live.

✓ I don't think so, but there are a lot of plants where I live.

The word 'plans' is incorrect here; it should be 'plants' to refer to vegetation. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects sentence meaning.

× I don't think people in my country often sent flowers to others.

✓ I don't think people in my country often send flowers to others.

The modal verb 'do' in negative present tense requires the base form of the verb 'send', not the past tense 'sent'.

× Instead they usually give food as gift, especially homemade dishes or traditional snacks.

✓ Instead, they usually give food as a gift, especially homemade dishes or traditional snacks.

The sentence is missing a comma after 'Instead' and the article 'a' before 'gift'.

× They usually send it when there's an event in here and for example during celebration our visits.

✓ They usually send it when there's an event here, for example during celebrations or visits.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'In here' should be 'here'. 'During celebration our visits' should be 'during celebrations or visits'.

× Sharing food is seen as a more meaningful.

✓ Sharing food is seen as more meaningful.

The article 'a' is unnecessary before 'more meaningful' because 'meaningful' is an adjective and 'more meaningful' is a comparative adjective used predicatively here.