Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you love flowers and mention your favorite flower with reasons.

Example: Yes, I love flowers very much. I use them daily, especially when I go to pray at my home temple. Among all flowers, the lotus is my favorite because it symbolizes purity and beauty.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Please try to speak clearly and use complete sentences. Also, provide specific details about who in your family loves flowers and how they use them. Use linking words to make your answer logical.

Example: Yes, everyone in my family loves flowers. They often use flowers during their daily prayers at the temple or even decorate our home with them.

Suggestion: Your answer is fragmented and unclear. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Mention the types of flowers you have planted and how they benefit you. Use linking words to connect your points.

Example: Yes, I have planted many flowers in my home garden. They make the place beautiful and provide a peaceful environment for me to relax.

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more fluent and grammatically correct. Try to explain when and why you take photos of flowers. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: I usually take photos of flowers, but not every day. I often do this when I have photography assignments from my office, as I really enjoy flower photography.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat fragmented. Try to use complete sentences and explain the tradition more clearly. Provide examples of occasions when people send flowers. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Example: Yes, sending flowers is a common tradition in my country. People often give flowers to express their feelings on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, or festivals.

× I will use. In a daily basis.

✓ I use flowers on a daily basis.

The phrase 'I will use' is incorrect here because the student is talking about a habitual action, so the simple present tense 'I use' is appropriate. Also, 'In a daily basis' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on a daily basis'.

× Whenever I will go for a. Prayer at my home temple.

✓ Whenever I go for a prayer at my home temple.

In English, when using 'whenever' to talk about habitual actions, the simple present tense is used, not the future tense 'will go'.

× Usually I will use Lotus.

✓ Usually I use lotus flowers.

'Lotus' should be pluralized to 'lotus flowers' to indicate the general use of the flower. Also, 'I will use' should be 'I use' for habitual actions.

× This is one of my favorite follower.

✓ This is one of my favorite flowers.

The word 'follower' is incorrect; the correct word is 'flower'. Also, 'favorite' is singular because it refers to 'one of my favorite flowers'.

× Yes, in my family all ark. Love flowers BIC AWS every.

✓ Yes, in my family, all are flower lovers every day.

The original sentence is unclear and contains errors. 'All ark' should be 'all are', and 'Love flowers BIC AWS every' is unclear; it is corrected to 'all are flower lovers every day' to convey the intended meaning.

× But he will use in their daily life like whenever they will go to. Temple or whenever they are playing at home.

✓ But they use them in their daily life, like whenever they go to the temple or whenever they are playing at home.

The use of 'will' is incorrect for habitual actions; simple present tense 'use' and 'go' should be used. Also, 'he' is inconsistent with 'their'; 'they' is appropriate.

× Yes, I planted a lot of flowers at my home.

✓ Yes, I have planted a lot of flowers at my home.

The sentence is grammatically correct but using present perfect 'have planted' is better to indicate the action's relevance to the present.

× So. I usually. Take benefits with them.

✓ So, I usually benefit from them.

The original sentence is fragmented and awkward. 'Take benefits with them' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'benefit from them'.

× And yes, I can see. I delivered that place where the flowers are. Very.

✓ And yes, I can see the place where the flowers are very clearly.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I delivered that place' is incorrect; it should be 'I can see the place'. The adverb 'very' should modify 'clearly'.

× I will use. When I will. Take a task from my office.

✓ I use them when I take a task from my office.

The use of 'will' is incorrect for habitual actions; simple present tense should be used. Also, 'I will use' is incomplete; it should specify what is used.

× Especially for the in photographie.

✓ Especially for photography.

The phrase 'the in photographie' is incorrect. The correct word is 'photography' without 'the' or 'in'.

× So that time I will take flowers and I love flowers photographie.

✓ At that time, I take photos of flowers because I love flower photography.

The use of 'will' is incorrect for habitual or repeated actions; simple present tense 'take' is appropriate. Also, 'flowers photographie' should be 'flower photography'.

× There, people share. Their feelings. Show others with sending flowers.

✓ There, people share their feelings and show them to others by sending flowers.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper pronouns. 'Show others with sending flowers' is incorrect; it should be 'show them to others by sending flowers'.

× Or they will give. Flowers to others.

✓ Or they give flowers to others.

The use of 'will' is unnecessary here as the sentence describes a habitual action; simple present tense 'give' is appropriate.