Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên kết ý tốt hơn. Hãy tập trung vào việc trình bày ý chính một cách tự nhiên, tránh lặp từ và nói quá dài dòng.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and elegant. I also enjoy their pleasant fragrance. Moreover, I like to give flowers as gifts to my mother to show my affection.

Suggestion: Bạn cần hoàn thiện câu trả lời với cấu trúc câu đầy đủ và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp thông tin cụ thể hơn về lý do người thân yêu thích hoa.

Example: Yes, my mother loves flowers for several reasons. She finds them beautiful and elegant, which always boosts her energy. She also enjoys being surrounded by flowers because they make her feel happy.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về môi trường xung quanh.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because our neighborhood loves gardening. Seeing flowers helps me feel relaxed and improves my mood, creating a positive environment.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và diễn đạt ý một cách tự nhiên hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và mạch lạc.

Example: No, I don't often take photos of flowers because I don't have much free time. However, I really enjoy looking at flowers in my home.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp lý do cụ thể, tránh lặp từ và lỗi phát âm.

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. Flowers help express feelings and make both the sender and receiver feel happy and relaxed.

× I love flowers because of a lot of reasons.

✓ I love flowers because of a lot of reasons.

The phrase 'a lot of reasons' is acceptable, but 'many reasons' is more natural. However, this is not a strict grammar error, so no correction is needed here.

× Second of all I'll I really want to smell it We could is really it smells so good an last time less I can give it as a gift for my mother everyday.

✓ Second of all, I really want to smell them because they smell so good, and lastly, I can give them as a gift to my mother every day.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect conjunctions and pronouns. 'I'll I' is incorrect; 'We could is really it smells so good' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses proper conjunctions 'because' and 'and lastly' to connect ideas clearly, and correct pronouns 'them' for plural 'flowers'.

× She loves flowers because of force of several reasons.

✓ She loves flowers because of several reasons.

The phrase 'because of force of several reasons' is incorrect. The word 'force' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The correct phrase is 'because of several reasons'.

× First of all, she find flowers very beautiful and elegant which always boost her energy.

✓ First of all, she finds flowers very beautiful and elegant which always boosts her energy.

The verbs 'find' and 'boost' need to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. Therefore, 'find' should be 'finds' and 'boost' should be 'boosts'.

× Secondly, she really enjoy being.

✓ Secondly, she really enjoys it.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. 'Enjoy being' is incorrect without an object. The corrected sentence 'she really enjoys it' completes the thought properly.

× Yes they are, there are a lot of flowers where I lived because our neighborhood really loves flower and when we see flowers with your soul a relaxed and boost our mood on so it makes it makes a positive environment.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live because our neighborhood really loves flowers, and when we see flowers, our soul feels relaxed and our mood is boosted, so it creates a positive environment.

The original sentence has multiple issues: 'Yes they are' is incorrect; it should be 'Yes, there are'. 'Where I lived' should be 'where I live' to match present tense. 'Loves flower' should be 'loves flowers' (plural). The phrase 'with your soul a relaxed and boost our mood on' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'our soul feels relaxed and our mood is boosted'. Also, 'it makes it makes' is repetitive and corrected to 'it creates'.

× No, I don't really take full photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't really have more time to take photos of them.

✓ No, I don't really take photos of flowers in my daily life because I don't really have much time to take photos of them.

The phrase 'full photos' is incorrect; 'photos' alone is sufficient. Also, 'more time' is incorrect in this context; 'much time' is appropriate for uncountable nouns like 'time'.

× But I really but I really love us saying flowers in my home.

✓ But I really love seeing flowers in my home.

The phrase 'love us saying flowers' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'love seeing flowers'. 'Us' is an incorrect pronoun here and 'saying' is the wrong verb form.

× Yes. People in my country often same flowers to others on some special occasions like birthdays or anniversary's because flowers like give give out field so feel so confident and also makes me feel so relaxed.

✓ Yes. People in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries because flowers give a feeling of confidence and also make me feel relaxed.

'Same flowers' should be 'send flowers'. 'Anniversary's' is incorrect possessive; should be plural 'anniversaries'. The phrase 'flowers like give give out field so feel so confident' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'flowers give a feeling of confidence'. Also, 'makes me feel' should be 'make me feel' to agree with plural subject 'flowers'.