Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer expressions. For example, instead of 'At my favorite flower are also sunflower and Jasmine becaused the smell of Jasmine is like very refreshing and very gentle form my eye,' say 'My favorite flowers are also sunflowers and jasmine because the smell of jasmine is very refreshing and gentle to my senses.'

Example: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. My favorite flowers also include sunflowers and jasmine because the smell of jasmine is very refreshing and gentle to my senses.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use correct verb forms and avoid unnecessary phrases like 'and all.' For example, say 'She really enjoys sunflowers and growing different plants at home. She spends a lot of time taking care of her garden because it makes her feel happy and relaxed.'

Example: Yes, I know many people who love flowers, especially my mother. She really enjoys sunflowers and growing different plants at home. She spends a lot of time taking care of her garden because it makes her feel happy and relaxed.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'in my eye area' and 'she plans many different types of flower she take care of.' Use clearer expressions and correct grammar. For example, say 'No, there are not many flowers in my area because most houses don't have gardens. However, my mother has created a beautiful garden on our rooftop where she grows many different types of flowers and takes good care of them.'

Example: No, there are not many flowers in my area because most houses don't have gardens. However, my mother has created a beautiful garden on our rooftop where she grows many different types of flowers and takes good care of them.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has many grammatical errors and unclear sentences. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Not really, I don't take photos of flowers daily, but if I see a unique or beautiful flower, I try to take a photo to keep the memory.'

Example: Not really, I don't take photos of flowers daily, but if I see a unique or beautiful flower, I try to take a photo to keep the memory.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but incomplete sentences and grammatical mistakes. Complete your sentences and use correct grammar. For example, say 'In Bangladesh, sending flowers to others is not very common. However, in countries like the USA and many European countries, giving flowers is a popular and traditional way to show appreciation and celebrate special occasions.'

Example: In Bangladesh, sending flowers to others is not very common. However, in countries like the USA and many European countries, giving flowers is a popular and traditional way to show appreciation and celebrate special occasions.

× Yes I do, I love flowers specially roses.

✓ Yes I do, I love flowers, especially roses.

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'especially' to indicate emphasis or preference. 'Specially' means 'for a special purpose' which does not fit the context.

× At my favorite flower are also sunflower and Jasmine becaused the smell of Jasmine is like very refreshing and very gentle form my eye.

✓ My favorite flowers are also sunflower and jasmine because the smell of jasmine is very refreshing and very gentle to my nose.

The sentence has singular/plural mismatch: 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'sunflower and jasmine'. Also, 'becaused' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. 'Like very refreshing' is incorrect; 'very refreshing' suffices. 'Form my eye' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to my nose' since smell relates to the nose.

× Yes I know many people who love flower, specially my mother.

✓ Yes I know many people who love flowers, especially my mother.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. Also, 'specially' should be 'especially' as explained before.

× She really enjoy a sunflowers and growing different plants at home.

✓ She really enjoys sunflowers and grows different plants at home.

The verb 'enjoy' must agree with the third person singular subject 'She', so it should be 'enjoys'. 'A sunflowers' is incorrect; 'sunflowers' is plural and does not need 'a'. Also, 'growing' should be changed to 'grows' to maintain parallel verb structure.

× She spent a lot of time taking care of her garden becauses it makes her feel happy and relaxed and all.

✓ She spends a lot of time taking care of her garden because it makes her feel happy and relaxed.

'Becauses' is a typo; correct word is 'because'. The phrase 'and all' is informal and unnecessary here. Also, 'spent' should be 'spends' to match present tense context.

× No, there are not many flowers in my eye area becauses most houses don't have gardens.

✓ No, there are not many flowers in my area because most houses don't have gardens.

'Eye area' is incorrect; likely intended 'my area'. 'Becauses' is a typo; correct word is 'because'.

× However, my mother has created a beautiful garden on our rooftop where she plans many different types of flower she take care of.

✓ However, my mother has created a beautiful garden on our rooftop where she plants many different types of flowers and takes care of them.

'Plans' should be 'plants' to mean putting plants in the garden. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match 'many different types'. 'She take care of' should be 'she takes care of them' for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Not really, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life but if I I. Watch our unique flower or a beautiful flower. Then I try to take a photo. And it is it keep.

✓ Not really, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life, but if I see a unique or beautiful flower, I try to take a photo and keep it.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'If I I. Watch' is incorrect; it should be 'if I see'. 'It is it keep' is incorrect; corrected to 'and keep it' to express retaining the photo.

× In Bangladesh sending flowers to others not very common.

✓ In Bangladesh, sending flowers to others is not very common.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. Also, a comma after 'In Bangladesh' improves clarity.

× However, in countries like USA or many Europe countries giving flowers is very popular and traditional way to show appreciation and celebrate special occasions.

✓ However, in countries like the USA or many European countries, giving flowers is a very popular and traditional way to show appreciation and celebrate special occasions.

'Europe countries' should be 'European countries' to use the correct adjective form. 'USA' should be preceded by 'the'. 'Traditional way' needs the article 'a' before it.

× People often send flower as.

✓ People often send flowers as gifts.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural subject 'People'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'gifts' completes the meaning.