Names— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Avoid repetition like "chord chord" and explain the meaning more precisely. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Example: My name is Orin, which is derived from the Greek god Odin. It symbolizes wisdom and knowledge. Therefore, my name carries a special meaning related to intelligence and learning.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid informal phrases like "get squared away."

Example: If I were to name my child, I would choose a name with a deep meaning. Additionally, I would prefer it to be unique so that my child stands out and is not confused with many others.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repeating the same information. Try to combine sentences for better flow.

Example: No, my name is unique; neither my family members nor my friends share the same name.

Suggestion: Even if you lack knowledge, try to give a brief opinion or say what you think based on what you know. Avoid saying you cannot answer; instead, express your thoughts politely and clearly.

Example: I am not very familiar with Chinese naming traditions, but I believe that in the past, names might have been more traditional, while nowadays, parents may choose more modern or unique names.

Suggestion: It is important to remain polite and professional during the test. Even if you do not know the answer, respond politely and try to give a simple answer or say you are unsure.

Example: I am not sure about the popular names in China, but I think some traditional names might still be common among people.

× My name is Orin and Orin is originated from the Greek God named Odin.

✓ My name is Orin and Orin originated from the Greek God named Odin.

The verb 'originated' is used incorrectly with 'is'. 'Originated' is the past tense and past participle form and should be used without 'is' in this context. The correct form is 'Orin originated from...'.

× So you can tell the special meaning of my name is actually a chord chord of knowledge and.

✓ So you can tell the special meaning of my name is actually a chord of knowledge.

The sentence is incomplete and contains a repeated word 'chord'. The phrase 'chord chord of knowledge and' is incorrect and incomplete. Removing the repetition and the incomplete ending improves clarity and correctness.

× If I have to name my next generation, I will rather pick a name with a deep meaning and also I would love it to be a bit unique so he doesn't just get squared away with a lot of people.

✓ If I have to name my next generation, I would rather pick a name with a deep meaning and also I would love it to be a bit unique so he doesn't just get mixed up with a lot of people.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used after 'If' in a conditional sentence; 'would' is appropriate here. Also, the phrase 'get squared away' is incorrect in this context; 'get mixed up' or 'get confused' fits better.

× Not only in my family but also in my known circle and my friend.

✓ Not only in my family but also in my known circle and my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'circle' and to indicate multiple people in the known circle.

× Among my friend, there is no one with the same name as mine.

✓ Among my friends, there is no one with the same name as mine.

The noun 'friend' should be plural 'friends' when referring to more than one person.

× Actually, I don't have lots of knowledge about Chinese names and about their friends.

✓ Actually, I don't have much knowledge about Chinese names and about their meanings.

The phrase 'about their friends' is incorrect and likely a mistake for 'about their meanings'. Also, 'lots of knowledge' is better expressed as 'much knowledge' in this context.

× To me, as I don't know the meaning of Chinese words or anything about Chinese names meaning all of the names sounds kind of similar to me, so I can't answer to that.

✓ To me, as I don't know the meaning of Chinese words or anything about Chinese names' meanings, all of the names sound kind of similar to me, so I can't answer that.

The phrase 'Chinese names meaning' should be 'Chinese names' meanings' to show possession. Also, 'sounds' should be 'sound' to agree with plural 'names'. The phrase 'answer to that' should be 'answer that'.