Part 1
Examiner
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Candidate
Yes, I see the petals, the one I was a child. I usually spend my weekends doing jigsaw puzzles with my family.
Examiner
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Candidate
I usually do puzzles the 1 I feel border because it can have some miralax the ender partner time.
Examiner
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Candidate
I enjoyed doing what titles more because I like her pain with language and learning new words. I think the lumbar part, those are difficult up 'cause I'm not good at math.
Examiner
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Candidate
Yes, I think it is very good for old people to do puzzles because it can help her improve lamoree and the concentrations.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达存在较多错误,建议简洁明了地描述童年时拼图的经历,并避免语法错误。
Example: Yes, I enjoyed doing jigsaw puzzles when I was a child. I usually spent my weekends solving puzzles with my family.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误,表达不清晰。建议用简单句子表达何时做拼图,并说明原因。
Example: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because it helps me relax and pass the time.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 回答中词汇和语法错误较多,表达不准确。建议明确表达喜欢哪种拼图及原因,并说明哪种更难。
Example: I enjoy doing word puzzles more because I like playing with language and learning new words. Number puzzles are more difficult for me because I'm not good at math.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答表达不够准确,词汇错误影响理解。建议用正确词汇表达拼图对老年人的好处。
Example: Yes, I think puzzles are very good for old people because they can help improve memory and concentration.
× Yes, I see the petals, the one I was a child.
✓ Yes, I saw the puzzles when I was a child.
这里应该使用过去时态,因为描述的是过去的经历。原句中使用了现在时态'see',不符合时间背景。
× I usually spend my weekends doing jigsaw puzzles with my family.
✓ I usually spend my weekends doing jigsaw puzzles with my family.
这句话语法正确,时态使用恰当,无需修改。
× I usually do puzzles the 1 I feel border because it can have some miralax the ender partner time.
✓ I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because it can help me relax and pass the time.
原句中'1'应为'when','border'应为'bored','miralax'应为'relax','ender partner time'应为'end or pass the time'。此外,代词使用不当,应使用'me'作为宾语。
× I enjoyed doing what titles more because I like her pain with language and learning new words.
✓ I enjoy doing word puzzles more because I like playing with language and learning new words.
这里描述的是现在的喜好,应该用现在时态'enjoy'而非过去时'enjoyed'。另外,'what titles'应为'word puzzles','her pain'应为'playing'。
× I think the lumbar part, those are difficult up 'cause I'm not good at math.
✓ I think the number puzzles are difficult because I'm not good at math.
'lumbar part'应为'number puzzles','difficult up'应为'difficult',句中代词使用不当,应直接说'those are difficult'或'the number puzzles are difficult'。
× Yes, I think it is very good for old people to do puzzles because it can help her improve lamoree and the concentrations.
✓ Yes, I think it is very good for old people to do puzzles because it can help them improve memory and concentration.
'her'应为'them'指代老年人,'lamoree'应为'memory','the concentrations'应为'concentration',且不可数名词不加冠词。