Hometown— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh những câu không liên quan và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Example: My hometown is Kodam village, located in the Nissan district in northern Vietnam. It is a small and peaceful place surrounded by beautiful nature.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để liên kết các ý và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về thiên nhiên và con người ở quê hương bạn.

Example: What I like most about my hometown is its natural beauty and the friendly people. For example, the green landscapes are very peaceful, and the community is always supportive and welcoming.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và có thể thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I have lived there since I was a child, and during this time, I have grown quite fond of the community and the local environment.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng danh từ số nhiều đúng cách và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về các tiện ích hiện đại sẽ giúp câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Example: In my opinion, my hometown is a good place for young people because it has many modern facilities, such as shopping malls and various entertainment options like cinemas and parks.

× Hating bowling.

✓ I hate bowling.

The original sentence 'Hating bowling.' lacks a subject and proper verb form, making it a sentence fragment. Adding the subject 'I' and changing 'Hating' to 'hate' forms a complete sentence expressing a dislike for bowling.

× Is this a small city of the northern in Vietnam?

✓ Is this a small city in the north of Vietnam?

The phrase 'of the northern' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'in' and the noun form should be 'north' instead of 'northern' when referring to a region. So, 'in the north of Vietnam' is the proper expression.

× MMM in my hometown I like most is natural and people.

✓ What I like most in my hometown is the nature and the people.

The original sentence misuses 'MMM' and has awkward word order. Replacing 'MMM' with 'What' and rearranging the sentence clarifies the meaning. Also, 'natural' should be 'nature' as a noun, and adding 'the' before 'people' specifies them.

× People in there are friendly and supportive.

✓ People there are friendly and supportive.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'there'. 'There' already indicates location, so 'People there' is correct.

× We create a warm and welcoming our Murphy.

✓ We create a warm and welcoming atmosphere.

The phrase 'welcoming our Murphy' is unclear and likely a mistake. Replacing it with 'welcoming atmosphere' makes the sentence meaningful and grammatically correct.

× I have been live there since I was a child and during this time I have grown quite fond of the community and the local environment.

✓ I have been living there since I was a child, and during this time I have grown quite fond of the community and the local environment.

The phrase 'have been live' is incorrect. The present perfect continuous tense requires the verb in '-ing' form, so 'have been living' is correct.

× because they have many modern facilities like shopping mall and many entertainment.

✓ because they have many modern facilities like shopping malls and much entertainment.

'Shopping mall' should be plural 'shopping malls' to match 'many'. 'Entertainment' is uncountable, so 'much' is used instead of 'many'.