Hometown— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi về quê hương mà chỉ nói về thời gian sống ở đó. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó mới bổ sung chi tiết. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác hơn.

Example: My hometown is Ho Chi Minh City, where I have lived for 19 years since I was born.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và lặp lại. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc mạch lạc với các từ nối phù hợp và chi tiết cụ thể hơn về những điều bạn thích.

Example: I like Ho Chi Minh City because it is a big city with many conveniences, such as supermarkets and good schools, which provide high-quality education.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn câu hỏi, tránh lặp lại thông tin đã nói trước đó. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và chính xác về thời gian sống ở quê hương.

Example: I have lived in Ho Chi Minh City for 19 years since I was born.

Suggestion: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi phát âm tên thành phố và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc mạch lạc với các từ nối và chi tiết cụ thể về cơ hội cho giới trẻ.

Example: Yes, I believe Ho Chi Minh City is a great place for young people because it offers many job opportunities and educational resources.

× I have I have been living in Ho Chi Minh City for 19 years.

✓ I have been living in Ho Chi Minh City for 19 years.

The sentence contains a repetition of 'I have'. The correct form is 'I have been living' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present. Remove the repeated phrase to correct the sentence.

× Because Ho Chi Minh City is the big city in Vietnam, so this have, uh, many convenience things to do, for example, like uh, supermarkets or school, uh, the quality of education and uh, yeah.

✓ Because Ho Chi Minh City is a big city in Vietnam, it has many convenient things to do, for example, supermarkets or schools, the quality of education, and so on.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'big city'; it should be 'a big city' because it is not a unique or previously mentioned city. Also, 'this have' is incorrect; it should be 'it has' to agree with the singular subject. 'Convenience things' should be 'convenient things' as an adjective is needed here. 'School' should be plural 'schools' to match the context.

× As I say before, I have been living in Ho Chi Minh City for 19 years when I was born.

✓ As I said before, I have been living in Ho Chi Minh City for 19 years since I was born.

The phrase 'As I say before' should be in past tense 'As I said before' to match the time reference. 'When I was born' is incorrect in this context; 'since I was born' correctly indicates the starting point of the action continuing to the present.

× Yeah, I think so because Hokkien city is the, one of the biggest city in Vietnam. So this have, umm, opportunity and or chance for young people who want to, uh, seek a job or learn something for education and work.

✓ Yeah, I think so because Ho Chi Minh City is one of the biggest cities in Vietnam. So it has opportunities and chances for young people who want to seek a job or learn something for education and work.

The definite article 'the' before 'one of the biggest city' is unnecessary and incorrect. It should be 'one of the biggest cities' with 'cities' plural to match 'one of the'. 'This have' is incorrect; it should be 'it has' to agree with the singular subject. 'Opportunity and or chance' should be plural 'opportunities and chances' to match the context.