Hometown— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating similar ideas and improve sentence structure. For example, say "My hometown is Khulna, a calm and beautiful city."

Example: My hometown is Khulna, a calm and beautiful city known for its peaceful environment and scenic views.

Suggestion: Your answer has some repetition and unclear words like "jamless". Try to use clearer vocabulary and link your ideas smoothly. For example, "I like my hometown because it is peaceful and surrounded by nature, which makes it very relaxing."

Example: I like my hometown because it is peaceful and surrounded by nature, which makes it very relaxing and enjoyable to live in.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit confusing. Use correct tense and clearer structure. For example, "I was born in Khulna and lived there until now, but currently, I am studying here while my family still lives in Khulna."

Example: I was born in Khulna and lived there until recently. Now, I am studying here, but my family still lives in Khulna.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words. For example, "Yes, I believe my hometown is good for young people because it offers many opportunities to learn important skills, such as communication."

Example: Yes, I believe my hometown is good for young people because it offers many opportunities to learn important skills, such as communication and teamwork.

× It's the calm and beautiful city.

✓ It's a calm and beautiful city.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'calm and beautiful city' because the city is being introduced for the first time and is not previously specified. The correct article is 'a' to indicate one of many possible cities.

× I like my hometown because it's the it's the jamless city.

✓ I like my hometown because it's the jamless city.

The phrase 'it's the it's the' contains a repeated article and verb phrase, which is a redundancy error. Removing the repeated part corrects the sentence.

× I like my hometown because it's the it's the jamless city.

✓ I like my hometown because it's a jamless city.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'jamless city' because the city is being described generally, not as a specific known city. The correct article is 'a'.

× It's quite natural.

✓ It is quite natural.

Contraction 'It's' is acceptable in spoken English, but for clarity and formality, 'It is' is preferred. However, this is optional and not a strict grammar error.

× I lived there by born.

✓ I have lived there since I was born.

The phrase 'lived there by born' is grammatically incorrect. The correct expression to indicate living somewhere from birth is 'have lived there since I was born' using present perfect tense and proper prepositions.

× I born in Khulna and now I'm, I'm living here.

✓ I was born in Khulna and now I'm living here.

The verb 'born' requires the auxiliary verb 'was' in past tense passive form to indicate birth. 'I born' is incorrect; it should be 'I was born'.

× my family lives in here.

✓ My family lives here.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'here'. 'Here' already indicates location, so 'in here' is redundant and incorrect in this context.

× the city gives city teaches us many useful things like how to communicate each other.

✓ The city teaches us many useful things like how to communicate with each other.

The phrase 'gives city teaches us' is redundant and incorrect; 'teaches us' alone suffices. Also, 'communicate each other' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communicate with each other' because 'communicate' requires the preposition 'with' when referring to interaction between people.