Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be slightly more natural and add a brief clarifying detail in one sentence. Start with a clear topic sentence and then give one concise supporting detail using a linking word (for example, “so” or “and”). Avoid repetition of location words.

Example: I work as a nurse at a tertiary hospital. I mainly care for adult patients in the general medicine ward, so I gain a lot of clinical experience every day.

Suggestion: Focus on accuracy, concision, and coherence. Begin with a clear sentence naming the hospital and its type, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word like “and” or “which”. Correct grammar (e.g., avoid “where they where we cater of”) and use precise vocabulary (e.g., “tertiary hospital” or “third-level hospital”).

Example: I work at Della Serrati Memorial Hospital, which is a public tertiary hospital. It serves many patients from the region, so the wards are often busy.

Suggestion: Provide a balanced opinion with one clear reason and a brief example. Use linking words such as “but” correctly and correct phrasing (e.g., “some colleagues are difficult to work with”). Keep sentences short and natural.

Example: Yes, it's a good place to work because the facilities are modern and the managers are supportive. However, some colleagues can be difficult to work with, which sometimes makes shifts stressful.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence expressing your feeling, then give one specific reason using a linking word like “because” and correct verb forms (e.g., “I grew up here”). Avoid overly short fragmented sentences.

Example: Yes, I love working here because it is my hometown and I grew up nearby. As a result, I feel comfortable and enjoy helping members of my community.

Suggestion: Separate professional plans from personal plans or clarify how they relate. Use correct grammar (e.g., “My plans are” or “I plan to”) and provide one specific, relevant professional detail if the question is about work. If mentioning personal plans, briefly explain how they affect work.

Example: I plan to work abroad for a few years to gain international nursing experience. After that, I hope to settle down and marry my boyfriend, which is why I'm considering opportunities in his country.

× I work here in a Della Serrati Memorial Hospital.

✓ I work here at Della Serrati Memorial Hospital.

Use of preposition and article: 'in a Della Serrati Memorial Hospital' is incorrect. Use 'at' for workplaces and proper names of institutions and omit the indefinite article before a proper hospital name. Also remove 'a' because the hospital name is a proper noun.

× It's a public hospital where they where we cater of a lot of patients because we're on a third level of hospital.

✓ It's a public hospital where we care for a lot of patients because we are a tertiary (third-level) hospital.

Multiple errors: incorrect word choice 'cater of' should be 'care for' (preposition and verb choice), duplicate 'they where we' is redundant and ungrammatical, and 'third level of hospital' should be 'tertiary hospital' or 'a third-level hospital'. Rephrase to a clear subject-verb structure 'we care for a lot of patients' and use correct terminology.

× Yes, it is a good place to work, but there are some people who kind not good to work with.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to work, but there are some people who are not kind and are not good to work with.

Missing verbs and wrong word order: 'kind not good' is ungrammatical. Insert the verb 'are' for the adjective 'kind' and add 'are not good to work with' or combine adjectives: 'who are not kind and not easy to work with.' Ensure each adjective has the correct linking verb.

× Of course I love here because it's my hometown.

✓ Of course I love it here because it's my hometown.

Missing object pronoun: 'love here' needs the object pronoun 'it' to indicate the place. Use 'love it here'.

× It's where I grow up.

✓ It's where I grew up.

Tense error: referring to past action (growing up) requires past tense 'grew up', not present 'grow up.' Use past simple for completed past events.

× My future work plans is to go abroad and marry my boyfriend.

✓ My future work plans are to go abroad and marry my boyfriend.

Subject-verb agreement: 'plans' is plural and requires the plural verb 'are' rather than 'is'.