Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Perbaiki tata bahasa dasar (tenses dan artikel), buat jawaban lebih langsung dan teratur. Gunakan kalimat topik yang jelas, lalu satu atau dua rincian pendukung singkat. Hindari pengulangan kata-kata seperti "the my" dan kata pengisi seperti "yeah".

Example: I recently graduated from a foundation program. Currently, I work at my parents' company as an assistant, helping with daily business activities, which gives me practical experience.

Suggestion: Hindari kata pengantar berlebihan dan perbaiki struktur kalimat (subject-verb agreement, plural/singular). Sebutkan posisi dengan jelas dan jelaskan satu tugas spesifik sebagai dukungan.

Example: I work at my parents' company as a secretary. I mainly handle appointments and handle daily paperwork to keep operations organized.

Suggestion: Perbaiki kelancaran dan tata bahasa (word choice, gerund/infinitive). Jelaskan alasan spesifik mengapa tempat itu baik dengan contoh konkrit, gunakan linking word seperti "because" atau "so".

Example: Yes, it's a good place to work because I can continuously learn about running a business. For example, I often observe how my parents negotiate with suppliers and manage finances.

Suggestion: Jawaban kurang koheren dan ada frasa yang tidak jelas (mis-phrasing seperti "sun meeting company" dan "UMM"). Fokuskan jawaban: nyatakan apakah Anda menyukai tempat itu dan jelaskan satu atau dua alasan yang relevan. Hindari informasi membingungkan atau tidak terkait.

Example: Yes, I like working there because the atmosphere is friendly and supportive. Although the work can be tiring, I appreciate the team and often relax by having a good meal with coworkers after work.

Suggestion: Jawaban cukup jelas tetapi perlu perbaikan tata bahasa dan spesifikasi. Perjelas industri yang dimaksud dan gunakan contoh konkret tentang langkah yang akan diambil. Gunakan linking words untuk logika (e.g., "therefore", "for example").

Example: I would like to become an entrepreneur in the future because I enjoy creating opportunities and managing projects. For example, I plan to start a small trading business in construction materials and learn more about supply chains to build experience.

× I recently graduate foundational program.

✓ I recently graduated from a foundational program.

The student used the base form 'graduate' but the sentence refers to a completed action in the past, so the past tense 'graduated' is required. Also add the preposition 'from' before the program and the article 'a' before 'foundational program'. Suggestion: use past simple for completed actions and include necessary articles and prepositions.

× Currently I working at the my parents company.

✓ Currently I am working at my parents' company.

The present continuous tense requires the auxiliary verb 'am' with the '-ing' form 'working'. Remove the extra article 'the' before 'my parents company' and use the possessive apostrophe 'parents'' for correct ownership. Suggestion: use 'I am working' for ongoing actions and write possessives correctly.

× It helps daily business activity and yeah.

✓ It helps with daily business activities.

The sentence needs the preposition 'with' to show support and the noun 'activities' should be plural to match 'daily' meaning multiple tasks. 'Yeah' is informal and can be omitted. Suggestion: include appropriate prepositions and pluralize nouns when referring to multiple routines.

× I will tell you I'm working at the my parents company which is help daily business activity.

✓ I'll tell you I'm working at my parents' company, which helps with daily business activities.

The clause 'which is help' is incorrect; after 'which' a verb must agree with the subject: use 'helps'. Also include 'with' and pluralize 'activities'. Remove extra 'the' and use the contraction 'I'll' if desired. Suggestion: ensure relative clauses have correct verb forms and agreement.

× I'm as a secretaries.

✓ I'm a secretary.

'Secretary' should be singular when referring to one person, and the article 'a' is used with a singular countable noun. 'As' is unnecessary; use 'I'm a secretary' or 'I work as a secretary'. Suggestion: match number (singular/plural) and structure when stating a job.

× I think there is the good applies I ever been because I'm continue to learning a business and I want to being entrepreneurs.

✓ I think it is the best place I have ever been because I continue to learn about business and I want to become an entrepreneur.

Multiple issues: 'there is the good applies' is ungrammatical—use 'it is the best place'. Use present perfect 'have ever been' for experiences up to now. 'I'm continue to learning' should be 'I continue to learn' (verb form), and 'I want to being entrepreneurs' should be 'I want to become an entrepreneur' (infinitive + singular noun). Suggestion: use correct comparative/superlative forms, appropriate verb tenses, and correct infinitive forms.

× Yes I would, I work in a sun meeting company and my job can be quite tiring.

✓ Yes I would. I work in a small meeting company and my job can be quite tiring.

The original 'Yes I would,' is unclear but acceptable; better as 'Yes I would.' 'Sun meeting' is likely a mispronunciation or typo; I corrected to 'small meeting company' though confirm intended word. Modal 'can' is used correctly to express possibility. Suggestion: ensure vocabulary is accurate; separate sentences for clarity.

× That is why I enjoy good food after work.

✓ That is why I enjoy eating good food after work.

Add the gerund 'eating' after 'enjoy' because 'enjoy' should be followed by an -ing verb when describing activities. Suggestion: use 'enjoy + -ing' for activities you like doing.

× I would like to learn how to make UMM.

✓ I would like to learn how to make UMM.

No grammatical change if 'UMM' is a proper noun or specific item. If 'UMM' is unclear, ensure it is the correct term. Suggestion: confirm proper noun capitalization and clarity.

× I'm interested in business because I enjoy creating opportunities and managing projects.

✓ I'm interested in business because I enjoy creating opportunities and managing projects.

This sentence is grammatically correct; the present participle forms 'creating' and 'managing' correctly follow 'enjoy'. No change needed. Suggestion: keep gerund forms after 'enjoy'.

× I particularly interested in the industry such as meaning, construction, material and trading.

✓ I am particularly interested in industries such as mining, construction, materials, and trading.

Missing verb 'am' needed for 'I am particularly interested'. 'Meaning' appears to be a typo for 'mining'. Use plural 'industries' when listing multiple sectors and pluralize 'materials'. Suggestion: include the correct form of 'to be' and check vocabulary/spelling.

× But in this economy, I believe being an entrepreneur would allow me to grow personally and professionally.

✓ But in this economy, I believe being an entrepreneur will/would allow me to grow personally and professionally.

The sentence is acceptable with 'would' to indicate hypothetical outcome; 'will' can be used if the speaker is more certain. No grammatical correction required unless changing modality. Suggestion: choose 'will' for stronger certainty or keep 'would' for conditional meaning.