Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy, pronunciation of key words, and clarity. Begin with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms and prepositions, and avoid irrelevant or incorrect words (e.g., “pork” likely meant “park” or “port”). Use one clear supporting detail and a linking word. Keep it within 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: I work at a logistics company in Danang. I am responsible for checking shipping documents and coordinating with carriers and customs to ensure shipments run smoothly.

Suggestion: Give one clear topic sentence then one specific supporting detail using linking words. Correct small errors (possessive, word order, repetition). Avoid vague phrases like “to buy something” and finish the example properly.

Example: I work at a logistics company in the centre of Danang City. Because my office is near the Han River Bridge, it is very convenient to commute, and after work I often visit nearby cafes or shops.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer and use correct grammar for structures like “not only... but also.” Be specific and reduce repetition. Use linking words (for example, such as) correctly and give one concrete example of what you learn.

Example: Yes, it is a great place to work because it not only helps me develop professionally but also teaches me practical skills. For example, I have learned customs clearance procedures and how to prepare shipping documents.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points. Fix grammar errors (they’re → the; possessive and article use). Remove fillers and repetition. End the sentence completely and use linking words like “because” and “for example.”

Example: Yes, I love working there because the work environment is supportive and my colleagues are friendly. For example, they always help me when I have questions about procedures.

Suggestion: Give a clear, specific plan with correct tense and fewer fillers. Use linking words (then, so that, and) and state measurable goals or roles. Avoid repeating words and finish ideas fully.

Example: In the next three years I plan to stay with this company to improve our procedures and gain project experience. I hope to lead a small project team so I can apply what I learn and help optimize our operations.

× Now I'm looking after employee in a logistics company based in Nanak city.

✓ Now I'm looking after employees in a logistics company based in Nanak City.

The noun 'employee' should be plural 'employees' because it refers to more than one person in a workplace or to the general group; singular sounds unnatural here. Use plural when speaking generally about staff. Suggestion: use 'employees' or rephrase 'I'm in charge of employees'.

× My responsibilities involved checking the accuracy of the documents and cooperating with the related parties like pork or transporters to ensure the smooth.

✓ My responsibilities involve checking the accuracy of documents and cooperating with related parties like port operators or transporters to ensure smooth operations.

The job is described as a current role, so present simple 'involve' is correct rather than past 'involved'. 'The documents' can be 'documents' (general reference). 'pork' is likely a typo for 'port' or 'park'; context suggests 'port operators'. 'the smooth' is incomplete; use 'smooth operations'. Suggestion: use present simple for current duties and choose correct nouns ('port operators').

× I work in a logistics company in Danang City. This my office is located in the center of city which is near the Hang River bridge, which is really convenient for me to travel and to buy something.

✓ I work in a logistics company in Da Nang City. My office is located in the centre of the city near the Hang River bridge, which is really convenient for me for travelling and shopping.

Use 'My office' not 'This my office'. 'centre of the city' needs definite article 'the'. 'near the Hang River bridge' is fine but order improved. Use 'for travelling and shopping' rather than 'to travel and to buy something' for natural collocations. Also correct city name formatting. Suggestion: use 'my office' and include 'the' with 'city' and use gerunds for general activities.

× For example, after work I can I can go to visit.

✓ For example, after work I can go visit places or go out.

The sentence repeats 'I can' and lacks an object after 'visit'. It needs a clear object (places, shops, restaurants) or a rephrasing 'go out'. Suggestion: remove duplication and add a suitable object.

× Yes, definitely it is the perfect place to work because it's not only provides me an opportunity to develop myself and learn more about about major insights, for example about custom clearance procedure or about their shipping documents.

✓ Yes, definitely it is the perfect place to work because it not only provides me with opportunities to develop myself and learn more about major insights, for example customs clearance procedures or shipping documents.

After 'it' the verb should be 'provides' but the structure 'it not only provides' is correct; original had extra 'it's' causing wrong verb form. Also use 'provides me with opportunities' and pluralize 'procedures'. 'about about' is duplicated. Use 'customs clearance' not 'custom clearance'. Suggestion: remove extra 'it's', use 'provides me with opportunities', correct duplicates and plural nouns.

× Yes, I love the place where I'm working right now because they're in environment is really good for me to develop myself and and the employees and the I mean the colleagues is really nice and friendly.

✓ Yes, I love the place where I'm working right now because the work environment is really good for me to develop myself, and the employees, I mean my colleagues, are really nice and friendly.

'they're in environment' is incorrect pronoun use and word order; use 'the work environment'. 'the employees and the I mean the colleagues is' has subject-verb agreement issues; 'colleagues' is plural so use 'are'. Clarify 'my colleagues'. Suggestion: use 'the work environment' and ensure plural subjects take plural verbs.

× They are always willing to support and help me in.

✓ They are always willing to support and help me.

The preposition 'in' at the end is unnecessary and makes the sentence incomplete. Remove 'in' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: end with 'help me' or specify 'help me in my work' if intended.

× In the near future, about three years, I will work in this company and learn more about my procedure, to improve the procedure and learn more about other to join other projects I and moreover.

✓ In the near future, for about three years, I will continue working in this company to learn more about our procedures, improve them, and join other projects.

Use 'will continue working' or present continuous for planned future. 'my procedure' should be 'our procedures' or 'the procedures'. Sentence was disordered and had extra words 'to learn more about other to join other projects I and moreover'. Reorder to list intentions clearly and use infinitives correctly. Suggestion: combine actions with commas, use 'continue working', plural 'procedures', and concise phrasing.