Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: state your current status in one topic sentence, then give 1–2 concise supporting details. Fix grammar (use present tense and correct prepositions) and avoid irrelevant information. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Example: I am currently preparing to continue my studies abroad. I completed earlier higher education in science, but my studies were interrupted when my family moved; therefore I am planning to resume my degree in Canada next year.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly: say where you work now or, if you are not working, say so. Give a brief past/present distinction with clear linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., ‘planning to migrate’, ‘I worked in a hospital’).

Example: I’m not currently working because I am preparing to study abroad. Previously I worked at a local hospital near my home, where I assisted nursing staff with routine medical tasks.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words like “because” and “also.” Avoid vague phrases and odd idioms. Be precise about the kind of fulfillment and give one concrete example.

Example: Yes, it was a good place to work because it paid well and helped me save for my studies. It was also personally rewarding since I could support patients and comfort them during difficult times, which made the job meaningful.

Suggestion: Give a direct response, then add 1–2 clear reasons with examples. Use correct tense and collocations (e.g., ‘cooperative and helpful’, ‘helped me understand the system’). Avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, I liked working there because the staff were very cooperative and helpful. For example, senior nurses always guided me when I had difficulty understanding the patient record system.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement of your plan, then give specific steps and a timeline. Use correct future forms (“I would like to complete”, “I will return”). Avoid repetition and add one concrete detail about the kind of hospital role you want.

Example: In the next few years I would like to complete my higher education in the medical field. After graduating, I plan to return to my hometown and work as a clinical nurse in a reputable local hospital to gain practical experience.

× Well, I completed my higher education in science developer, but now I'm presumed my father study in foreign country, so I am continue.

✓ Well, I completed my higher education in science development, but now I presume my father is studying in a foreign country, so I am continuing my studies.

Multiple tense and word choice errors: 'science developer' is incorrect noun phrase; use 'science development' or specify field. 'I'm presumed' is incorrect passive/tense; use 'I presume' (present). 'my father study' lacks third person singular and auxiliary present continuous; use 'my father is studying'. 'so I am continue' needs present participle 'continuing' to show ongoing action. Suggest using clear present/past forms and correct noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I wanted to continue my higher education interrupted university in Canada.

✓ I want to continue my higher education at an interrupted university in Canada.

'Wanted' suggests past; context requires present/future intention so use 'want' or 'would like'. 'Interrupted university' is awkward — likely 'a university where my studies were interrupted' or 'an interrupted program'. Also use preposition 'at' before institution. Suggest: 'I want to continue my higher education at a university in Canada where my studies were interrupted.' Grammar problem type ID:7

× Well nowadays I'm planning for migrate to foreign country and I wanted to pursue my further study in foreign country.

✓ Well, nowadays I'm planning to migrate to a foreign country and I want to pursue further study there.

'Planning for migrate' is incorrect structure; use 'planning to migrate'. 'I wanted' mixes past with present plans; use 'I want' or 'I intend'. Also add article 'a foreign country' and avoid repeating phrase; use 'there'. Suggest using consistent present/future tense for plans. Grammar problem type ID:6

× But in the past I did some work in medical field such as hospital which is just throw away from my house.

✓ But in the past I did some work in the medical field at a hospital which is just a short distance from my house.

'in medical field' needs article 'the medical field'. 'such as hospital' should be 'at a hospital'. 'throw away' is wrong idiom; use 'a short distance away' or 'near'. Suggest using correct prepositions and idiomatic expressions. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Definitely just I think it is a very good place for work because it helped me earn money for my future goal.

✓ Definitely, I think it is a very good place to work because it helped me earn money for my future goals.

Awkward adverb order: 'Definitely just I think' should be 'Definitely, I think'. Use 'place to work' rather than 'place for work'. 'future goal' likely plural 'future goals'. Maintain natural word order and appropriate noun number. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Apart from this, it also give me a lot of personal fulfillment when I can help two other person in their rainy days.

✓ Apart from this, it also gives me a lot of personal fulfillment when I can help other people in their difficult times.

'give' needs third-person singular 'gives'. 'a lot of personal fulfillment' is okay. 'two other person' is wrong quantifier and number agreement; use 'other people' or 'two other people'. 'rainy days' is idiomatic but unclear; use 'difficult times'. Suggest subject-verb agreement and correct plural forms. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Of course, yes, I like the place where I did some did work because the staff was very cooperative and well as helpful.

✓ Of course, yes, I like the place where I worked because the staff were very cooperative and helpful.

'did some did work' is ungrammatical; use 'worked'. 'the staff was' — British English can take singular but 'staff were' is acceptable; ensure consistency. 'and well as helpful' should be 'and helpful'. Remove redundant words. Suggest simplifying verb forms and correct coordination. Grammar problem type ID:2

× They also helped me when I find difficulty in understanding any kind of system as well as.

✓ They also helped me when I had difficulty understanding any kind of system.

'find' should match past 'helped' — use 'had'. Remove unnecessary 'as well as' and use 'difficulty understanding'. Maintain consistent past tense for completed events. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Well, in my upcoming years I would like to completed my higher education in medical field.

✓ Well, in the coming years I would like to complete my higher education in the medical field.

'would like to completed' mixes modal with past participle; use base form 'complete'. Add article 'the' before 'medical field' and 'in the coming years' is more natural than 'upcoming years'. Suggest correct verb form after 'would like to'. Grammar problem type ID:7

× When I completed it I will come back to my native country and I will join reputed hospital in my near hometown and I wanted to I will want to.

✓ When I complete it, I will come back to my native country and I will join a reputed hospital near my hometown.

Tense inconsistency: use present simple 'complete' for the condition in first conditional, not past 'completed'. Also 'reputed hospital in my near hometown' requires article 'a' and correct preposition 'near my hometown'. Remove redundant 'and I wanted to I will want to.' Suggest use of correct conditional structure: 'When I complete it, I will...'. Grammar problem type ID:5