Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sắp xếp từ không đúng. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp về việc bạn là sinh viên và công việc gia sư của bạn, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: I am currently a student at Harlow University, majoring in English. Besides studying, I also work as a tutor at an English center.

Suggestion: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lỗi sai về thì và giới từ. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I work as a tutor at an English center. Although the office is about two kilometers from my home, I usually go there to save money on transportation.

Suggestion: Bạn đã trả lời khá đầy đủ nhưng cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít và cách dùng thì. Ngoài ra, nên dùng các liên từ để câu văn trôi chảy hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng.

Example: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because the environment is very active and motivating, which helps me stay productive. However, I had to leave my job because my study schedule became too busy, which was quite disappointing.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi sai về danh từ số nhiều, động từ và cách dùng từ. Hãy trình bày ý rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I really like the place where I work because I am a tutor. I work with many students and enjoy teaching them. It is rewarding to see their progress and improvement in language skills, which makes my job enjoyable.

Suggestion: Bạn cần tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện câu trả lời cho đầy đủ. Hãy sử dụng thì hiện tại hoàn thành hoặc tương lai đơn để nói về kế hoạch tương lai, đồng thời chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu.

Example: Actually, in the future I want to be a teacher. So right now, I have decided to study teaching as my major.

× I'm currently a student at Harlow University majoring English major, but on the top that I'm work at a tutor as a in English center.

✓ I'm currently a student at Harlow University majoring in English, but on top of that, I work as a tutor at an English center.

The phrase 'majoring English major' is incorrect; it should be 'majoring in English'. 'On the top that' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on top of that'. 'I'm work at a tutor as a in English center' has multiple errors: 'I'm work' should be 'I work', 'at a tutor' should be 'as a tutor', and 'in English center' should be 'at an English center'. These preposition and article errors affect clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I'm work as a in the center as a tutor.

✓ I work as a tutor at the center.

The phrase 'I'm work' is incorrect; it should be 'I work'. 'As a in the center' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at the center'. Prepositions must be used correctly to indicate location or role.

× Actually this office is quite far from my homes, it's about two kilometers and I usually work from is because I'm want to save money.

✓ Actually, this office is quite far from my home; it's about two kilometers, and I usually work from here because I want to save money.

The word 'homes' should be singular 'home' because it refers to the student's own residence. 'Work from is' is incorrect; it should be 'work from here'. Also, 'I'm want' is incorrect; it should be 'I want'. These errors involve singular/plural forms and incorrect pronoun usage.

× Yes, I think it's the good place to work because the environment is very active and motivating, which help me stay productive.

✓ Yes, I think it's a good place to work because the environment is very active and motivating, which helps me stay productive.

The phrase 'the good place' should be 'a good place' because it is a general statement, not a specific known place. 'Which help me' should be 'which helps me' to agree with the singular noun 'environment'. These are article and subject-verb agreement issues.

× However, I had to leave my job due to the busy schedule that I complete with my study, which were quite disappointing for me.

✓ However, I had to leave my job due to the busy schedule that I had to complete with my study, which was quite disappointing for me.

The phrase 'that I complete' should be in past tense 'that I had to complete' to match the past context. 'Which were' should be 'which was' because it refers to the singular noun 'schedule'. These are past tense and subject-verb agreement errors.

× I'm really like the place I work because I am a tutor.

✓ I really like the place I work because I am a tutor.

The phrase 'I'm really like' is incorrect; 'I'm' (I am) should be removed to correctly express liking something. Modal verbs and auxiliary verbs must be used correctly to convey meaning.

× I work with many student and students.

✓ I work with many students.

The phrase 'many student and students' is redundant and incorrect. 'Student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'many'. This is a singular/plural agreement issue.

× I enjoy teaching to them because it's worrying to warring to see the progress and have them improve their language skill which make my job very flawless and enjoyable.

✓ I enjoy teaching them because it's rewarding to see their progress and have them improve their language skills, which makes my job very fulfilling and enjoyable.

The phrase 'teaching to them' should be 'teaching them' as 'teach' is a verb that takes a direct object without 'to'. 'Worrying to warring' is incorrect; the intended word is 'rewarding'. 'Language skill' should be plural 'language skills'. 'Which make' should be 'which makes' to agree with singular 'which'. These are preposition, word choice, pluralization, and subject-verb agreement errors.

× Actually, in the future I want to be a teacher.

✓ Actually, in the future, I want to be a teacher.

This sentence is correct as is; no correction needed.

× So right now I'm decided to study to study the teaching teaching major, so.

✓ So right now, I've decided to study the teaching major.

The phrase 'I'm decided' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I've decided' (present perfect). Repetition of 'to study' and 'teaching' is redundant and should be removed. These are tense and sentence structure errors.