Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时应避免重复和语气词过多，句子结构应更清晰，直接回答问题并简洁说明身份和工作内容。

Example: I am currently working as a research assistant after recently completing my master's degree at East China Normal University. My role mainly involves data analysis.

Suggestion: 回答应避免重复，注意发音清晰，使用准确词汇描述工作地点，并且句子应连贯。

Example: I work at Eastern UH Institute of Technology, a newly established university in Ningbo, located near Ningbo University. The campus is modern and well-equipped.

Suggestion: 回答应更自然流畅，减少语气词，表达观点时应更具体，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: I think it is a good place to work because it offers a good salary. However, besides scientific tasks, I also have to handle administrative duties like ordering meals and reception work.

Suggestion: 回答应更明确，避免模糊表达，使用正确词汇和句式表达对工作的感受和理由。

Example: I have mixed feelings about my workplace. Sometimes I enjoy it because I can learn new skills and communicate with my colleagues.

Suggestion: 回答应更简洁明确，减少语气词，注意语法和单复数形式，表达未来计划时更自信。

Example: Currently, I am taking a gap year and applying for a PhD program. After completing it, I hope to become a researcher at a prestigious university and engage in advanced scientific work.

× I just got my master degree this year from East China Normal University

✓ I just got my master's degree this year from East China Normal University

“master degree”应为“master's degree”，表示“硕士学位”，这里需要使用所有格形式。

× I am working as a research assistant for analysis. Do not take umm uh data set.

✓ I am working as a research assistant for analysis. I do not take, umm, uh, data sets.

“data set”应为复数形式“data sets”，因为通常数据集是复数，且句子缺少主语，需补充“I”。

× I am working in a bright new university named Eastern UH Institute Technology.

✓ I am working at a bright new university named Eastern UH Institute of Technology.

表示工作地点时，通常用介词“at”而非“in”，且机构名称应为“Institute of Technology”。

× It is nearby the Ningbo University UH.

✓ It is near Ningbo University UH.

“nearby”是副词或形容词，作介词时应用“near”，且“the”在专有名词前通常省略。

× It has a great and new compass.

✓ It has a great and new campus.

“compass”是指南针，正确词应为“campus”，表示校园。

× because it give me a lot of money.

✓ because it gives me a lot of money.

主语“it”为第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故用“gives”。

× I have to order meals or doing some reception work.

✓ I have to order meals or do some reception work.

“have to”后应接动词原形，不能用动名词“doing”。

× sometimes I can communicate with my college with uh, some new skills.

✓ sometimes I can communicate with my colleagues and learn some new skills.

“college”指大学，正确应为“colleagues”，意为同事；且表达更通顺。

× I want to be a researchers in some famous university

✓ I want to be a researcher in some famous university

“a”后应接单数名词，故用“researcher”而非复数“researchers”。