Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Përgjigjja juaj është e qartë dhe e natyrshme, por mund të shtoni një fjali për të dhënë më shumë informacion dhe për të bërë përgjigjen më të plotë.

Example: I'm a student currently studying physiotherapy at university.

Suggestion: Përpiquni të shmangni përsëritjet dhe të përdorni lidhëza për të bërë përgjigjen më rrjedhshme dhe më të qartë.

Example: I don't work at the moment because I'm a student studying physiotherapy; I'm currently in my third semester and expect to finish this year.

Suggestion: Përgjigjja duhet të jetë më e drejtpërdrejtë dhe të përpiqeni të përgjigjeni në pyetjen e bërë, edhe nëse nuk punoni, mund të flisni për vendin ku dëshironi të punoni.

Example: I don't work currently, but I hope to work in a good clinic where I can help patients recover.

Suggestion: Përpiquni të jeni më të qartë dhe të përdorni fjalë të thjeshta për të shprehur mendimin tuaj në mënyrë të kuptueshme.

Example: I don't work right now because I'm focusing on my studies, but I hope to work in a place where I can become a good physiotherapist.

Suggestion: Përpiquni të organizoni përgjigjen tuaj me fjalë lidhëse dhe të shmangni përsëritjet për të bërë përgjigjen më të qartë dhe më të rrjedhshme.

Example: My future plan is to work at a top clinic where I can help patients reduce their pain through physiotherapy and improve their quality of life.

× I don't work because I'm a student and I study for physiotherapy.

✓ I don't work because I'm a student and I am studying physiotherapy.

The verb 'study' should be in the present continuous tense 'am studying' to indicate an ongoing action, which fits better with the context of being a student currently engaged in study.

× Uh, I'm in a third semester and uh, it will finish this year.

✓ Uh, I'm in the third semester and it will finish this year.

The article 'a' should be 'the' before 'third semester' because it refers to a specific semester. The future tense 'will finish' is correct here.

× No, I don't like because I'm not working in these days because I'm a student and I try to study something and to make a doctor in my life and a direction of one company that I need.

✓ No, I don't like it because I'm not working these days since I'm a student, and I try to study something to become a doctor in my life and to lead a company that I need.

The phrase 'in these days' is incorrect; it should be 'these days' without 'in'. Also, 'make a doctor' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'become a doctor'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× My future work plan since UH is a grade one clinic UH or physiotherapy and umm to make people feel feel better and UH, to lower her her pain and to to explain them.

✓ My future work plan is to work at UH, a grade one clinic, in physiotherapy, to help people feel better, to reduce their pain, and to explain to them.

The sentence has tense and structure issues. 'Since UH is' is unclear; it should be 'is to work at UH'. Repetition of words like 'feel feel' and 'her her' are errors. 'Lower her her pain' should be 'reduce their pain' to match plural 'people'.

× The physiotherapy is the most important for their pain and for the life.

✓ Physiotherapy is very important for their pain and for their life.

'The physiotherapy' is incorrect; 'physiotherapy' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. Also, 'for the life' should be 'for their life' to correctly use the possessive pronoun matching 'their pain'.