Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Also, correct the pronunciation and grammar, for example, 'campers' should be 'campuses'.

Example: I am a university student at Kachan University in Incheon. The university has two campuses: one in Songnam and the other, which is the medical campus, in Incheon where I study.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, complete your sentences and avoid unfinished thoughts.

Example: I don't work at the moment because I am a university student. However, I plan to work in a hospital in the future since I want to become a doctor. Currently, I am studying hard to improve my medical knowledge and skills.

Suggestion: Make sure to answer the question clearly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases like 'thicker campus' and 'environment that study well related'. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because my medical campus at Kachan University offers many related majors such as nursing, physical therapy, paramedics, and pharmacy. This creates a supportive environment for studying medical subjects.

Suggestion: Focus on answering the question directly and avoid hesitation. Use clear and complete sentences. Also, avoid unclear terms like 'medical arrangements and economists'.

Example: Although I don't work yet, I study at my medical campus, which I really like. It is a great place to study because it offers many medical-related majors and excellent facilities.

Suggestion: Provide a clear and structured answer with correct grammar. Use linking words to organise your ideas. Avoid unclear phrases like 'go overall in UK' and 'go going off roads'.

Example: Firstly, I plan to go to the UK to gain more detailed medical knowledge. Secondly, I intend to read many books related to medicine to improve my understanding.

× I am a university student I I'm in Kachan university is in Incheon.

✓ I am a university student. I'm at Kachan University, which is in Incheon.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper punctuation and conjunctions, causing confusion. Separating into two sentences and adding 'which is' clarifies the meaning and improves readability.

× We have two campers 1 is in song Nam and the other one is in incheon that is medical campus I I entered in.

✓ We have two campuses: one is in Songnam and the other is in Incheon; that is the medical campus I enrolled in.

'Campers' should be 'campuses' to refer to university locations. 'Song Nam' should be 'Songnam' as a proper noun. 'Entered in' is incorrect; 'enrolled in' is the correct phrase for joining a university.

× I am a university student so I don't work now but I will work in hospital because I want to be a doctor.

✓ I am a university student, so I don't work now, but I will work in a hospital because I want to be a doctor.

The sentence needs commas for clarity. Also, 'in hospital' should be 'in a hospital' to specify the place. The modal verb 'will' is correctly used to express future intention.

× So now I study hard my medical knowledge to improve my medical knowledge and skills so I practice many medical.

✓ So now I study hard to improve my medical knowledge and skills, and I practice many medical procedures.

The phrase 'study hard my medical knowledge' is incorrect; 'study hard to improve' is correct. Also, 'practice many medical' is incomplete; it should specify what is practiced, e.g., 'medical procedures'.

× Yes, because in my thicker campus in Catton University, we have many majors related to medical, for example nursing and physical therapy and paramedics and pharmacies.

✓ Yes, because in my main campus at Kachan University, we have many majors related to medicine, for example nursing, physical therapy, paramedics, and pharmacy.

'Thicker campus' is incorrect; likely meant 'main campus'. 'Catton University' should be 'Kachan University'. 'Related to medical' should be 'related to medicine'. 'Pharmacies' should be 'pharmacy' as a field of study.

× So we have environment that study well related.

✓ So we have an environment that is good for studying related subjects.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'an environment that is good for studying related subjects' clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.

× Umm, I'm a student so I don't work now, but I'm a study in my medical campus.

✓ Umm, I'm a student so I don't work now, but I study at my medical campus.

'I'm a study' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I study'. Also, 'in my medical campus' should be 'at my medical campus' to indicate location.

× This is a very good place to study because we have many major related to medical, so we have many medical arrangements and economists.

✓ This is a very good place to study because we have many majors related to medicine, so we have many medical departments and equipment.

'Many major' should be 'many majors'. 'Related to medical' should be 'related to medicine'. 'Medical arrangements and economists' is unclear; likely meant 'medical departments and equipment'.

× So we have many, we can have many.

✓ So we have many resources available to us.

The original sentence is incomplete and repetitive. Providing a complete sentence clarifies the intended meaning.

× Firstly I I will go overall in UK because I want to more medical knowledge, detailed medical knowledge.

✓ Firstly, I will go to the UK because I want to gain more detailed medical knowledge.

'Go overall in UK' is incorrect; 'go to the UK' is correct. 'Want to more medical knowledge' should be 'want to gain more medical knowledge'. Adding commas improves clarity.

× So I plan I will plan on go going off roads and secondly I will I will lead many books related to medical.

✓ So I plan to go abroad, and secondly, I will read many books related to medicine.

'Plan on go going off roads' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'plan to go abroad'. 'Lead many books' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'read'. Repetition of 'I will' is unnecessary.