Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is informative but a bit lengthy and slightly repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy by combining related information smoothly. Also, use correct prepositions and verb tenses for clarity.

Example: I'm currently working as an Office Administrative Assistant, a role I've held for two years, while also studying part-time in a personal sport worker course I enrolled in last year.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and has grammatical errors. Use correct verb forms and clearer descriptions. Also, try to provide more specific details about your tasks using linking words to improve coherence.

Example: I work in the tech department where I handle customers' bookings and appointments. Additionally, I send feedback reports about the services they received.

Suggestion: Your answer is positive but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrases. Use singular/plural agreement correctly and choose more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, it's a great place to work because the staff are very cooperative and helpful, which makes completing tasks easier. Moreover, the office has an attractive infrastructure that creates a pleasant working environment.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats ideas from the previous question and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid redundancy and use more precise vocabulary. Also, correct singular/plural forms and use linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I enjoy working there mainly because of the friendly and cooperative staff. Additionally, the appealing office environment motivates everyone and creates positive energy.

Suggestion: Your answer communicates your plans but has some awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. Use clearer expressions and correct article usage. Also, try to be more concise and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: In the future, I want to become a certified teacher because I have a passion for teaching children at the school level. To achieve this, I enrolled last year in a Bachelor of Education program, which is required for teaching certification.

× a position I have held from last two years

✓ a position I have held for the last two years

The phrase 'from last two years' is incorrect because 'from' is not used with durations in this context. The correct preposition is 'for' to indicate the duration of time. The sentence should use 'for the last two years' to express the period during which the position has been held.

× I work in a tech department but basically my job is there to handling a customer's book, their appointments, and most importantly I send the review back about their job.

✓ I work in a tech department but basically my job there is to handle a customer's book, their appointments, and most importantly I send the review back about their job.

The phrase 'my job is there to handling' is incorrect. The verb after 'to' should be in the base form, so 'handling' should be 'handle'. Also, 'my job is there to handle' is awkward; better phrasing is 'my job there is to handle'. This corrects the verb form and word order.

× They helps a lot in doing the different tasks.

✓ They help a lot in doing the different tasks.

The subject 'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' without the 's'. 'Helps' is used with singular third person subjects, so this is a subject-verb agreement error.

× Along with this, the infrastructure of the office is very eye seeking.

✓ Along with this, the infrastructure of the office is very eye-catching.

The phrase 'eye seeking' is incorrect. The correct adjective to describe something visually attractive is 'eye-catching'. This is a fixed expression used to describe something that attracts attention visually.

× Yes, it is very good place to work.

✓ Yes, it is a very good place to work.

The phrase 'very good place' requires an article before 'very good place' because 'place' is a singular countable noun. The correct form is 'a very good place'.

× the staff who are working there is very cooperative and helpful.

✓ the staff who are working there are very cooperative and helpful.

The subject 'staff who are working there' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× They helps a lot in doing the different tasks.

✓ They help a lot in doing the different tasks.

The plural subject 'They' requires the base form of the verb 'help' without 's'. 'Helps' is singular third person form, so this is a subject-verb agreement error.

× the infrastructure of the offices is very eye appealing and it always motivates the staff to work harder and it gives a positive vibrations.

✓ the infrastructure of the offices is very eye-appealing and it always motivates the staff to work harder and it gives positive vibrations.

The adjective 'eye appealing' should be hyphenated as 'eye-appealing' when used before a noun. Also, 'a positive vibrations' is incorrect because 'vibrations' is plural and should not have the article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'positive vibrations'.

× One of the main reason is the staff.

✓ One of the main reasons is the staff.

The phrase 'One of the main reason' is incorrect because 'one of the' is followed by a plural noun. Therefore, 'reason' should be plural 'reasons'.

× In the future, I like to become a certified teacher in the interior because I always have a passion to teach the children at the school level.

✓ In the future, I would like to become a certified teacher in interior design because I always have a passion for teaching children at the school level.

The phrase 'I like to become' should be 'I would like to become' to express future intention politely. 'Teacher in the interior' is unclear; likely 'teacher in interior design' is intended. Also, 'a passion to teach' should be 'a passion for teaching'. Prepositions 'for' and gerund form 'teaching' are correct here.

× For achieving this goal, last year I enrolled in the university and the Bachelor of Education because the Bachelor of Education is the main requirement for getting the certification in teaching department.

✓ To achieve this goal, last year I enrolled in the university and the Bachelor of Education program because the Bachelor of Education is the main requirement for getting certification in the teaching department.

The phrase 'For achieving this goal' should be 'To achieve this goal' to express purpose. Also, 'the Bachelor of Education' should be 'the Bachelor of Education program' for clarity. 'Getting the certification in teaching department' should be 'getting certification in the teaching department' with the definite article before 'teaching department'.