Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors like 'study in abroad'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I am currently a university student, and I plan to study abroad in the future to enhance my career prospects.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and awkward. Try to answer directly and use better vocabulary like 'improve my knowledge' instead of 'enhance my level of information'.

Example: I don't work currently, but I am studying at university, which helps me improve my knowledge and skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and specific. Use plural form 'facilities' and link your ideas better. Also, mention more relevant facilities beyond air conditioning.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because it offers many facilities, such as air conditioning and a quiet environment, which help me work efficiently.

Suggestion: Your answer is positive but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly and link ideas smoothly. Avoid repeating 'effective and efficient' together.

Example: Yes, I like the place where I work because my colleagues encourage me and we often collaborate, which fosters good teamwork.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Be specific and concise. Use correct terms and avoid repetition. Also, complete your sentences fully.

Example: My future plan is to become an ITI engineer because it offers well-paid jobs, and many multinational companies prefer hiring professionals in this field.

× I am a student and now I study in university and in the future I like to study in abroad for my bright future.

✓ I am a student and now I study at university and in the future I would like to study abroad for my bright future.

The phrase 'study in university' should be 'study at university' because 'at' is the correct preposition for institutions like universities (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). Also, 'like to study in abroad' is incorrect; 'abroad' does not need 'in' before it (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). Additionally, 'I like to study' should be 'I would like to study' to express future intention politely (Grammar Problem Type ID: 4).

× I do not work in any organization but I do study in university which help me in my education and also enhance my level of information.

✓ I do not work in any organization but I do study at university which helps me in my education and also enhances my level of information.

The preposition 'in university' should be 'at university' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 11). Also, 'which help me' should be 'which helps me' to agree with the singular subject 'university' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 27). Similarly, 'enhance' should be 'enhances' for subject-verb agreement (Grammar Problem Type ID: 27).

× Yes, definitely it is a good place to work because there are a lot of facilities which encourage me to do effective and efficient work.

✓ Yes, definitely it is a good place to work because there are a lot of facilities which encourage me to do effective and efficient work.

No correction needed in this sentence for singular/plural issues; 'facilities' is plural and correctly used with 'encourage'.

× For example, there are facility of air conditioner which is very good and make environment suitable for every individual or worker.

✓ For example, there is a facility of air conditioning which is very good and makes the environment suitable for every individual or worker.

'There are facility' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a facility' because 'facility' is singular (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1 and 3). 'Air conditioner' should be 'air conditioning' to refer to the system (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13). 'Make environment' should be 'makes the environment' to agree with singular subject and include the definite article (Grammar Problem Type ID: 27 and 17).

× Yes, definitely. I like the place where I work because there are different type of individual who encourage me to do my work effectively and efficient.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like the place where I work because there are different types of individuals who encourage me to do my work effectively and efficiently.

'Different type' should be 'different types' to match plural 'individuals' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). 'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). 'Efficient' should be 'efficiently' to correctly modify the verb 'do' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 13).

× Also there are many colleagues and friends which help me in my work and this lead to teamwork.

✓ Also, there are many colleagues and friends who help me in my work and this leads to teamwork.

'Which' is used for things; for people, 'who' is correct (Grammar Problem Type ID: 12). 'This lead' should be 'this leads' to agree with singular subject (Grammar Problem Type ID: 27).

× My future plan work is ITI Engineer because in the field of ITI engineer there are a high paid job and most of multinational company prefer to IIT engineer and prefer high salary for individual and.

✓ My future work plan is to become an ITI Engineer because in the field of ITI engineering there are high-paying jobs and most multinational companies prefer ITI engineers and offer high salaries to individuals.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'future plan work' should be 'future work plan' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26). 'ITI Engineer' needs an article and verb 'to become' for clarity (Grammar Problem Type ID: 22 and 26). 'There are a high paid job' is incorrect; it should be 'there are high-paying jobs' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1 and 13). 'Most of multinational company' should be 'most multinational companies' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). 'Prefer to IIT engineer' should be 'prefer ITI engineers' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26). 'Prefer high salary for individual and' is incomplete and should be 'offer high salaries to individuals' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26).