Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid overly formal phrases like 'responsible for artificial intelligence and cutting edge research' without further explanation. Try to add a linking phrase to make it more conversational.

Example: I work as a software engineer, mainly focusing on artificial intelligence and some innovative projects.

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more specific and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'some project to detect some images about AI'.

Example: I work for a well-known global company that produces computers, and I am involved in projects using AI to analyse images.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Try to provide reasons or examples to support your opinion, using linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is supportive and there are many opportunities to learn new skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Be clear and specific about the problems, and use linking words to organise your ideas.

Example: Actually, I don't like it very much because there are several issues, such as the human resources department not addressing our salary concerns properly.

Suggestion: Your answer has unclear expressions like 'chop up to another company' and some grammatical mistakes. Use clear and correct phrases, and explain your plans with linking words.

Example: I plan to move to another company in the future, so I work hard every day and continuously study English and coding to improve my skills.

× I work in a global renowned company which is about the production of computers and I do some project to detect some images about AI.

✓ I work at a globally renowned company that produces computers, and I work on some projects to detect images related to AI.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to working at a company; 'at' is more appropriate. 'Global renowned' should be 'globally renowned' to use the adverb form. 'Which is about the production of computers' is awkward; 'that produces computers' is clearer. 'Do some project' should be 'work on some projects' to correctly express involvement. 'Detect some images about AI' is unclear; 'detect images related to AI' is more precise.

× I do some project to detect some images about AI.

✓ I work on some projects to detect images related to AI.

The word 'project' should be plural 'projects' to agree with 'some', which indicates plural. Also, 'do' is not the best verb here; 'work on' is more appropriate for projects.

× For example, the human resource used to listen our listen our salary.

✓ For example, the human resources department used to listen to our concerns about salary.

'Human resource' should be 'human resources department' to refer to the team. 'Listen our' is incorrect; the verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'listen our salary' is unclear; it should be 'listen to our concerns about salary' for clarity.

× For example, the human resource used to listen our listen our salary.

✓ For example, the human resources department used to listen to our concerns about salary.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Missing 'to' causes grammatical error.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Would you like the place where you work?

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× I plan to chop up to another company so I work hard every day and study English and coding continuously.

✓ I plan to change to another company, so I work hard every day and study English and coding continuously.

The phrase 'chop up to another company' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'change to another company' or 'move to another company'. 'Chop up' is not used in this context.