Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Cümlenizi doğrudan soruya yanıt verecek şekilde kurun ve gereksiz tekrarları önleyin. Örneğin, "I am currently a student studying biology, chemistry, and maths, which are important for my future studies." gibi daha net ve kısa cümleler tercih edin.

Example: I am currently a student studying biology, chemistry, and maths, which are important for my future studies.

Suggestion: Cevabınızda netlik ve tutarlılık eksik. Doğrudan soruya cevap verin ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın. Ayrıca, cümlenizi tamamlayarak anlamlı hale getirin. Örneğin, "I don't work currently, but I used to have a part-time job to prepare for university applications." gibi.

Example: I don't work currently, but I used to have a part-time job to prepare for university applications.

Suggestion: Cümleniz anlaşılması zor ve eksik. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Örneğin, "Yes, it is a good place to work because it helps improve communication skills and provides valuable experience for university references." gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because it helps improve communication skills and provides valuable experience for university references.

Suggestion: Cümleniz tekrarlar içeriyor ve anlamı net değil. Daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Örneğin, "Yes, I would like to work there again and I would definitely recommend it to my friends because it helps improve communication skills and prepares them for future life." gibi.

Example: Yes, I would like to work there again and I would definitely recommend it to my friends because it helps improve communication skills and prepares them for future life.

Suggestion: Cümleniz tamamlanmamış ve anlamı belirsiz. Daha açık ve mantıklı cümleler kurmalısınız. Örneğin, "First, I plan to complete my university studies, then use my references to find a good job and perform well." gibi ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: First, I plan to complete my university studies, then use my references to find a good job and perform well.

× I am studying biology, chemistry and maths which is important for my future and the grades actually.

✓ I am studying biology, chemistry and maths which are important for my future and the grades actually.

The subject 'biology, chemistry and maths' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× My university needs some umm.

✓ My university requires some preparation.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence with a clear verb and object improves clarity and sentence structure.

× I do not work but I used to go. MMM. Preparation job for my university reference and I.

✓ I do not work, but I used to do a preparation job for my university reference.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Combining the fragments into a complete sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Preparation job for my university reference and I.

✓ Preparation job for my university reference and me.

The pronoun 'I' is incorrectly used as an object; 'me' is the correct object pronoun in this context.

× It also offers may not entails like the university reference and.

✓ It also offers, and may entail, things like university references.

The original sentence is unclear and incorrectly structured. Correcting the pronoun usage and sentence structure clarifies the meaning.

× Communication skills improve the.

✓ It helps improve communication skills.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding a subject and verb completes the sentence.

× I would like to, I would like to and I definitely suggest my friends to work there to performance there for the future life and also improves their communication skills and behaviors.

✓ I would like to, and I would definitely suggest my friends work there to gain experience for their future life and also improve their communication skills and behavior.

The modal verb 'would' is used correctly, but the sentence structure and verb forms needed correction for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× First and foremost, I would definitely attempt to in university and then.

✓ First and foremost, I would definitely attempt to enter university and then.

The modal verb 'would' is correct, but the verb phrase was incomplete. Adding 'enter' completes the meaning.

× Make my do my references to to occupy a job and be the best.

✓ Make my references to occupy a job and be the best.

The phrase 'make my do my references' is incorrect. Removing the extra 'my do' corrects the pronoun usage and clarifies the sentence.