Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“become to be a teacher”和“accustomed on children”不符合英语习惯。建议加强语法准确性，使用更自然的表达方式，同时避免冗长。

Example: Yes, I am currently a student at Nanjing Audit University, majoring in Chinese international education. Although the major is challenging, I find it very rewarding. In the future, I hope to become a teacher and share Chinese culture with children from other countries.

Suggestion: 回答过于简短且语法错误，如“I don't have job”应为“I don't have a job”。建议回答时完整表达，避免语法错误。

Example: I don't have a job at the moment because I am focusing on my studies as a student.

Suggestion: 回答内容较好，但句子结构略显简单，缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because the public transportation is very convenient for my commute, and the environment is clean and fresh, which makes working there pleasant.

Suggestion: 回答较好，使用了连接词和具体细节，但“there is the perfect workplace”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式。

Example: Yes, I really like the place where I work. The convenient public transportation makes my daily commute quick and stress-free. Moreover, the workplace is well maintained and has a refreshing environment.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“separate myself from others”表达不准确，句子结构混乱。建议明确表达职业目标，使用正确语法。

Example: My long-term goal is to stand out in my career. Currently, I am focusing on my major to build a solid foundation, and I plan to gain practical experience through internships or projects related to my field to improve my skills.

× In the future, I will become to be a teacher to pass Chinese culture and accustomed on children from other countries.

✓ In the future, I will become a teacher to pass on Chinese culture and accustom children from other countries.

动词后不应加不必要的to，'become'后直接接名词。'pass'后应加介词'on'表示传递，'accustomed'应改为动词形式'accustom'，并且搭配宾语children。

× I will become to be a teacher to pass Chinese culture and accustomed on children from other countries.

✓ I will become a teacher to pass on Chinese culture and accustom children from other countries.

'pass'后应加介词'on'表示传递，'accustomed on'用法错误，应为'accustom'加宾语。

× I don't have job, I'm a student now.

✓ I don't have a job, I'm a student now.

'job'是可数名词，否定句中应加冠词'a'。

× Yes, of course there is convenient public transportation for me to commute and the environment is very clean and fresh.

✓ Yes, of course there is convenient public transportation for me to commute, and the environment is very clean and fresh.

句子中缺少逗号连接两个并列分句，影响句子结构的清晰。

× Yes, it's no exaggeration to say there is the perfect workplace because the public transportation here is very convenient, which makes my daily commute quick and stress free.

✓ Yes, it's no exaggeration to say there is a perfect workplace because the public transportation here is very convenient, which makes my daily commute quick and stress-free.

'the perfect workplace'用法不当，改为'a perfect workplace'更合适。'stress free'应加连字符，构成复合形容词。

× My long term goal has always been to separate myself from others in my career.

✓ My long-term goal has always been to distinguish myself from others in my career.

'separate myself from others'表达不自然，改为'distinguish myself from others'更符合语境。'long term'应加连字符。

× Currently I am to focus on my major to build a solid foundation and then I plan to get more practical experience through internships or projects related to my fields so that I can be well.

✓ Currently I am focusing on my major to build a solid foundation, and then I plan to get more practical experience through internships or projects related to my field so that I can do well.

'am to focus'用法错误，应为' am focusing'表示现在进行时。'fields'应为单数'field'。'can be well'表达不当，应为'can do well'。