Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and slightly unclear due to redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly answering the question first, then briefly explaining your role and how it relates to your studies. Avoid repeating phrases and ensure grammatical accuracy.

Example: I am currently a student at Red River College Polytechnic, studying Hospitality and Tourism Management. As part of my course, I am doing a Co-op placement as an assistant manager at a local gas station, where I apply the skills I have learned.

Suggestion: Your answer has some hesitation and unclear phrases. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

Example: I work as an assistant manager at Red River Court gas station, which is close to my home. Moreover, the staff are very friendly and supportive, so I really enjoy working there.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to be more specific about what makes the environment pleasant and how the team supports each other.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is pleasant and the team is very supportive. For example, whenever we face problems, we always help each other, which makes the work enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer is positive but contains grammatical errors and could be more coherent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and correct subject-verb agreement. Also, avoid repeating similar points without elaboration.

Example: Yes, definitely. I have been working there for the past two years, and I especially appreciate my supportive manager. Additionally, the customers are very friendly, which makes the workplace enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer is brief and informal. Try to provide a more complete response with clear structure and avoid informal words like 'yeah'. Also, explain your plans with more detail to enrich your answer.

Example: In the future, I plan to establish my own business in the hospitality industry. Specifically, I want to own and manage my own hotel.

× I have taken Hospitality and Tourism management course and as a part of my course I am doing my Co-op placement at regular Co-op gas station as an assistant manager where I am applying the which helps me to apply the things I have learned from my course.

✓ I have taken the Hospitality and Tourism management course and as a part of my course I am doing my Co-op placement at a regular Co-op gas station as an assistant manager where I am applying what I have learned from my course.

The sentence had missing articles 'the' before 'Hospitality and Tourism management course' and 'a' before 'regular Co-op gas station'. Also, 'the which helps me to apply the things' is incorrect; it should be 'what I have learned' to correctly express the application of knowledge. Articles are important for specifying nouns correctly in English.

× I am doing my Co-op placement at regular Co-op gas station as an assistant manager where I am applying the which helps me to apply the things I have learned from my course.

✓ I am doing my Co-op placement at a regular Co-op gas station as an assistant manager where I am applying what I have learned from my course.

The phrase 'at regular Co-op gas station' is missing the article 'a' before 'regular'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article or determiner. Adding 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I am applying the which helps me to apply the things I have learned from my course.

✓ I am applying what I have learned from my course.

The phrase 'the which helps me to apply the things' is incorrect. The pronoun 'what' is used to refer to 'the things that' and is appropriate here. Using 'the which' is ungrammatical in this context.

× The customers out there is very supportive.

✓ The customers out there are very supportive.

'Customers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number. Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.

× I really enjoy to be there.

✓ I really enjoy being there.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'enjoy to be' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy being'.