Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为完整，但语法和表达上有些小错误，如“my everyday life are”应为“my everyday life is”。建议注意主谓一致，并尝试使用更自然的表达方式。

Example: I am currently a grade 11 student at an International School in Shanghai. I study various subjects like mathematics, economics, and geography, which keep my daily life quite busy and fulfilling.

Suggestion: 回答中“employer”用词不当，应使用“employee”或直接说“I don't work”。另外，回答较简单，建议直接回答并简要说明原因。

Example: I don't work at the moment because I am still a student studying in Shanghai, as I mentioned earlier.

Suggestion: 回答中出现了词汇错误，如“worry”应为“work”，表达不够自然。建议注意词汇准确性，并使用更流畅的句子结构。

Example: Yes, it's a great place to work because the environment is beautiful, with many green plants and flowers. They help improve your mood and help you concentrate better.

Suggestion: 回答中有重复词汇和口语填充词“umm”，建议减少口语化表达，使用更简洁流畅的句子。

Example: I really like the place where I study because I have spent a lot of time there and have many special memories. Also, it is close to my home.

Suggestion: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议完整表达计划，避免重复和语法错误。

Example: As a grade 12 student, my main plan is to focus on my studies for the next two years. I hope to work hard and get admitted to my dream university.

× I have so many courses to study such as mathematics, economics or geography, and my everyday life are quite fulfilled.

✓ I have so many courses to study such as mathematics, economics, or geography, and my everyday life is quite fulfilled.

主语“my everyday life”是单数，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”，而不是复数形式“are”。

× I study in an International School in Shanghai and I am now grade 11.

✓ I study at an International School in Shanghai and I am now in grade 11.

表示在某个学校或年级时，应该用介词“at”表示地点，年级前应加介词“in”。

× I study in Shanghai as I have mentioned in last question.

✓ I study in Shanghai as I mentioned in the last question.

“mentioned”后面不需要“have”，且“last question”前应加定冠词“the”。

× Yes, it's quite a good place to worry because it has really a great environment which you can see so many green plants and flowers.

✓ Yes, it's quite a good place to work because it has really a great environment where you can see so many green plants and flowers.

“worry”是动词，语境应为“work”；“which”改为“where”更合适，表示地点。

× These plants can make you have a better emotion every day and make you concentrate more.

✓ These plants can make you feel better every day and help you concentrate more.

“have a better emotion”表达不自然，应改为“feel better”；“make you concentrate more”改为“help you concentrate more”更通顺。

× I really like the place which I am working because umm I have stayed there for a long time and I have so many special memories about this place umm and this place is not far from my my home.

✓ I really like the place where I work because I have stayed there for a long time and I have so many special memories about this place, and this place is not far from my home.

“which I am working”应改为“where I work”；“my my home”重复，应删去一个“my”。

× Well, as a grade 12 student, my plan is all about my study first in in the first two years. Maybe I will work hard to get to my dream school and.

✓ Well, as a grade 12 student, my plan is to focus on my studies in the first two years. Maybe I will work hard to get into my dream school.

“my plan is all about my study first in in the first two years”结构混乱，应改为“my plan is to focus on my studies in the first two years”；“get to my dream school”应为“get into my dream school”；句尾不应以“and”结尾。