Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to answer the question directly and clearly without unnecessary personal introduction. Also, use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, say "I am 24 years old and I work as an administrator at the Faculty of Engineering at Forest University in Alexandria. I graduated one year ago."

Example: I am 24 years old and I work as an administrator at the Faculty of Engineering at Forest University in Alexandria. I graduated one year ago.

Suggestion: Be careful with word choice and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I work as an administrator at the Faculty of Engineering at Forest University in Alexandria, which is the city I love."

Example: I work as an administrator at the Faculty of Engineering at Forest University in Alexandria, which is the city I love.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. For example, "Yes, it is a good place to work because I graduated from this university and the job is comfortable."

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because I graduated from this university and the job is comfortable.

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your opinion clearly. For example, "No, I don't like the place where I work because the university is far from my home, and it takes about one hour to get there."

Example: No, I don't like the place where I work because the university is far from my home, and it takes about one hour to get there.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to show sequence. For example, "My ambition is to continue in this academic field; first, I want to take a master's degree, and then I plan to pursue a PhD."

Example: My ambition is to continue in this academic field; first, I want to take a master's degree, and then I plan to pursue a PhD.

× Hello, my name is I AM 24 years old.

✓ Hello, my name is [Name] and I am 24 years old.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'my name is I AM 24 years old' which mixes the introduction and age. It should separate the name and age properly using 'and'. Also, 'I AM' should be 'I am' in lowercase except for the start of the sentence.

× I work as administrator at Faculty of Engineering at Forest University in Alexandria and I graduate from one years ago.

✓ I work as an administrator at the Faculty of Engineering at Forest University in Alexandria and I graduated one year ago.

The sentence misses the article 'an' before 'administrator' and 'the' before 'Faculty of Engineering'. Also, 'graduate' should be in past tense 'graduated' because the action happened in the past. 'one years ago' should be 'one year ago' because 'year' is singular.

× OK, I work as an administrator at facility of Engineering in at Forest University in Alexandria.

✓ OK, I work as an administrator at the Faculty of Engineering at Forest University in Alexandria.

The phrase 'facility of Engineering' is incorrect; it should be 'Faculty of Engineering' with the article 'the' before it. Also, 'in at' is redundant; only 'at' is needed.

× I work in the same city I love.

✓ I work in the same city that I love.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'that' to connect the clauses properly.

× Maybe because this university graduated from it and it is a comfortable job and you.

✓ Maybe because I graduated from this university and it is a comfortable job for me.

The sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. 'This university graduated from it' is wrong; the subject should be 'I' who graduated from the university. Also, 'and you' is incomplete and unclear, so it is removed.

× No, I don't like place where you work because a place of the university is far from my home and take about one hour to reach the university.

✓ No, I don't like the place where I work because the university is far from my home and it takes about one hour to reach it.

The pronouns are incorrect: 'you' should be 'I' to refer to the speaker. 'a place of the university' should be 'the university'. Also, the verb 'take' should be 'takes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× My ambition, I hope, continue in this academic field, take a master degree and then take a PhD degree.

✓ My ambition is, I hope, to continue in this academic field, to take a master's degree and then a PhD degree.

The sentence lacks modal verb structure and infinitive forms. 'continue' and 'take' should be 'to continue' and 'to take'. Also, 'master degree' should be 'master's degree' to be correct.