Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и грамматически правильным. Следует избегать ошибок, таких как "I planning" вместо "I am planning". Также стоит использовать связующие слова для плавности речи.

Example: I am currently a senior high school student. Last summer, I worked part-time as a waiter, which helped me improve my communication skills. This summer, I am planning to work as a receptionist to gain more experience.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует улучшить связность и точность выражений, а также использовать правильные предлоги и времена.

Example: Currently, I am not working. However, last summer I worked part-time as a waiter at my best friend's restaurant. This job helped me develop my communication skills and earn some money for my studies.

Suggestion: Ответ нуждается в улучшении грамматики и лексики. Следует использовать более точные выражения, например, "salary" вместо "salaried", и избегать тавтологии.

Example: Yes, I think it is a good place to work for several reasons. Firstly, the work environment is friendly, with many students my age, which made it easy to make friends. Secondly, the salary was reasonable for a part-time job.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и нечеткие формулировки. Следует использовать правильные времена и более разнообразную лексику, а также связующие слова для логичности.

Example: Although I am not working now, I plan to work as a receptionist in the future. I believe it is a good job because it offers a good salary and helps improve communication and language skills.

Suggestion: Ответ содержит много грамматических ошибок и неполных предложений. Следует улучшить структуру, использовать правильные формы слов и более точные выражения.

Example: In the distant future, I plan to become a teacher because I have loved teaching children since I was young. Additionally, teaching can be financially rewarding. I also hope to open my own English language center to help others learn.

× In addition, I planning to get to work this summer as a. Reception.

✓ In addition, I am planning to work this summer as a receptionist.

The verb 'planning' requires an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'get to work' is awkward here; 'work' is more appropriate. 'Reception' is a noun; the correct job title is 'receptionist'.

× However in the last summer I worked in a part time job as a waiter on my best friends restaurant I enter.

✓ However, last summer I worked a part-time job as a waiter at my best friend's restaurant.

The phrase 'in the last summer' should be 'last summer'. 'Part time job' should be hyphenated as 'part-time job'. 'On my best friends restaurant I enter' is incorrect; it should be 'at my best friend's restaurant'. The word 'enter' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× This work helped me to develop my communication skills and help me also to earn some money to my study.

✓ This work helped me develop my communication skills and also helped me earn some money for my studies.

The phrase 'help me also to earn' should be 'also helped me earn' for parallel structure. 'To my study' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for my studies'.

× I found a lot of friends with who I talk even now.

✓ I found a lot of friends with whom I still talk.

The relative pronoun 'who' should be 'whom' as it is the object of the preposition 'with'. Also, 'even now' is better expressed as 'still' in this context.

× Secondly, I would mention the salaried.

✓ Secondly, I would mention the salary.

The word 'salaried' is an adjective meaning 'having a salary'; the noun 'salary' is correct here.

× First of all, I would say that they earned really good amount of money.

✓ First of all, I would say that they earn a really good amount of money.

The verb tense should be present simple 'earn' to describe a general fact. Also, 'a really good amount of money' requires the article 'a'.

× Additionally, this work may help me to develop my communication skills and my language.

✓ Additionally, this work may help me develop my communication skills and my language abilities.

The phrase 'my language' is incomplete; 'language abilities' or 'language skills' is more appropriate.

× Well, in the distant future I would set it.

✓ Well, in the distant future I would say it.

The phrase 'I would set it' is incorrect; likely intended is 'I would say it'.

× especially children's.

✓ especially children.

'Children's' is the possessive form; the plural noun 'children' is correct here.

× Additional L said that they earned really good amount of money.

✓ Additionally, I said that they earn a really good amount of money.

'Additional L' is a typo for 'Additionally, I'. The verb tense should be present simple 'earn' to describe a general fact. Also, 'a really good amount of money' requires the article 'a'.