Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và tự nhiên trong tiếng Anh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, dễ hiểu và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Example: I am currently working as an airport staff member. I enjoy this job because it allows me to broaden my horizons and improve my skills.

Suggestion: Bạn cần trả lời câu hỏi một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề để trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời logic hơn.

Example: I work for a logistics company located in the Menteng district. This location is very convenient for me because it is close to the airport and easy to get to other places.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về lý do bạn thích nơi làm việc. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because the environment is supportive. I can learn a lot from my colleagues and have good opportunities for career growth.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và câu nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: Yes, I like the place where I work because it is very friendly and dynamic. The people are helpful and always willing to lend a hand when I have difficulties with my work.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp với câu chủ đề, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về kế hoạch tương lai. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Example: In the future, I plan to pursue higher education because I want to improve my knowledge and skills. This will help me open up opportunities in other fields.

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✓ Now I'm currently working as an air hostess, especially late shifts. The simple reason for this is that the job allows me to broaden my horizons and improve my skills.

The original sentence contains many unclear and incorrect word choices and verb forms. 'Word' should be 'working' (present participle) to indicate current action. 'Air spots' likely means 'air hostess'. 'Broadening my heart isn't' is incorrect; it should be 'broaden my horizons'. The correction uses proper verb forms and clearer vocabulary to express the intended meaning.

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✓ I first worked in a logistics company which is located in our Menton district. It is a favorable location for me to get anywhere, especially the airport.

The sentence has tense and subject-verb agreement errors. 'I first in I worked' is incorrect; 'I first worked' is correct past tense. 'Which are located' should be 'which is located' to agree with singular 'company'. The rest of the sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

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✓ Yes, definitely the place where I work is fundamental and very supportive. Due to that, I can have a good relationship with my colleagues and learn a lot from their experience.

The original sentence has many unclear phrases and article misuse. 'Played the word' is incorrect; it should be 'the place where I work'. 'Fundament' should be 'fundamental'. 'Supported an' should be 'supportive'. 'College' should be 'colleagues'. The correction fixes article use and clarifies meaning.

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✓ Yes, definitely the place is very friendly and dynamic. The people I work with are very helpful and they are willing to lend a hand when I am stuck with my work.

The sentence lacks verbs and has article and preposition errors. 'The people I work' should be 'The people I work with'. 'Stock quote was my work' is incorrect; it should be 'stuck with my work'. The correction adds missing verbs and corrects article and preposition usage.

× In the future, maybe a plan so with suit of higher education are for. A simple reason for this is that I want to improve my knowledge and skill. 2 are opened up my opportunities to other feel.

✓ In the future, I may plan to pursue higher education. The simple reason for this is that I want to improve my knowledge and skills to open up my opportunities in other fields.

The original sentence has incorrect modal verb usage and unclear phrases. 'Maybe a plan so with suit of higher education are for' is incorrect; it should be 'I may plan to pursue higher education'. '2 are opened up' should be 'to open up'. The correction uses proper future tense and modal verb, and clarifies meaning.