Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and fragmented. Try to form complete sentences and avoid unnecessary pauses. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "I am currently a student pursuing Computer Software Engineering at Chandigarh University, which allows me to gain technical abilities and develop practical skills."

Example: I am currently a student pursuing Computer Software Engineering at Chandigarh University, which allows me to gain technical abilities and develop practical skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and lacks clarity. Avoid leaving sentences unfinished. Also, provide more specific information about your future plans. For example: "I do not work at the moment because I am a full-time student. However, after graduation, I plan to work in a reputed company related to my field."

Example: I do not work at the moment because I am a full-time student. However, after graduation, I plan to work in a reputed company related to my field.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and structured. Use linking words and correct grammar. For example: "Since I am still a student, I do not have workplace experience. However, I believe a good workplace should be friendly and stress-free, allowing employees to work with full enthusiasm."

Example: Since I am still a student, I do not have workplace experience. However, I believe a good workplace should be friendly and stress-free, allowing employees to work with full enthusiasm.

Suggestion: Your answer is too short and does not explain your opinion. Always try to give reasons or explanations. For example: "I do not currently work, but I would like to work in a place that is supportive and offers growth opportunities."

Example: I do not currently work, but I would like to work in a place that is supportive and offers growth opportunities.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. For example: "I want to get a job in digital marketing because I am passionate about it. It will not only provide me with a good salary but also help me gain professional certifications."

Example: I want to get a job in digital marketing because I am passionate about it. It will not only provide me with a good salary but also help me gain professional certifications.

× Currently I'm a student pursuing. Computer Software engineering at Chandigarh university it offers me to gain technical abilities and develop. Practical skills.

✓ Currently, I'm a student pursuing Computer Software Engineering at Chandigarh University, which offers me the opportunity to gain technical abilities and develop practical skills.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence breaks and lacks proper conjunctions, leading to sentence fragments. Combining the ideas into a single coherent sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Where do you work?>

✓ Where do you work?

The original sentence contains an extraneous '>' symbol which is not appropriate punctuation. Removing it corrects the sentence.

× No, I do not work at the moment because I'm a full time student. However, after completing my graduation I want to work. In a union called.

✓ No, I do not work at the moment because I'm a full-time student. However, after completing my graduation, I want to work in a union.

The original sentences are fragmented and incomplete. 'In a union called.' is incomplete and lacks the name of the union. Also, 'full time' should be hyphenated as 'full-time'. Combining the sentences and correcting punctuation improves clarity.

× Be 'cause of my student life, I do not have experience about workplace but I can say that the workplace should be more friendly and with a good environment where people cannot feel any type of stress and do their work with their fully enthusiasm.

✓ Because of my student life, I do not have experience in the workplace, but I can say that the workplace should be friendly and have a good environment where people do not feel any type of stress and do their work with full enthusiasm.

'Be 'cause' is informal and incorrect; it should be 'Because'. 'Experience about workplace' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in'. 'More friendly' is acceptable but 'friendly' alone is better here. 'With a good environment' should be 'have a good environment'. 'Cannot feel any type of stress' is better as 'do not feel any type of stress'. 'Their fully enthusiasm' is incorrect; it should be 'full enthusiasm' without 'their'.

× Would you like the place where you work?

✓ Would you like the place where you work?

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× No.

✓ No, I would not.

The answer 'No.' is too brief and does not fully respond to the question 'Would you like the place where you work?'. A more complete response is 'No, I would not.' to clearly express the negative response.

× I want to get a job in a digital marketing as I'm a passionate about it as it will not only provide me a high salary. Abbott also tried me internal certification.

✓ I want to get a job in digital marketing as I'm passionate about it, and it will not only provide me a high salary but also give me internal certification.

'A digital marketing' is incorrect; 'digital marketing' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'a'. 'I'm a passionate' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm passionate'. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; 'Abbott also tried me internal certification' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. It is corrected to 'but also give me internal certification' to make sense in context.