Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding unnecessary pauses and incomplete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide concise supporting details. For example, mention your job role and duration clearly without hesitation.

Example: I am currently working as a nurse in a hospital in our province. I have been working there for over two years now, gaining valuable experience in patient care.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences. Provide a clear and coherent description of your workplace using linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: I work in a small infirmary hospital located in our town. It mainly provides simple medical procedures and basic healthcare services to the community.

Suggestion: Make your answer more fluent by combining sentences and using linking words. Also, complete your thoughts fully to avoid abrupt endings.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because we help patients recover from their illnesses. Moreover, my coworkers are friendly and always helpful whenever problems arise.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to compare your current job with your previous one effectively.

Example: Yes, I like my workplace because it is only a five-minute drive from my home. Unlike my previous job where I had to stay at the workplace for a week, here I can go home daily.

Suggestion: Complete your sentences and avoid hesitation. Clearly state your future plans and explain your reasons logically using linking words.

Example: My future plan is to seek employment abroad. Therefore, I am currently working in a clinical setting here in the Philippines to gain experience, so I will be well-prepared for opportunities overseas.

× I'm already working right now in a certain hospital in our province's injuries and I've been working there for quite a long time for over. Two years.

✓ I'm already working right now in a certain hospital in our province's injuries department and I've been working there for quite a long time, for over two years.

The sentence has a punctuation error with a period after 'over' which breaks the sentence unnaturally. Also, 'province's injuries' is unclear; adding 'department' clarifies the meaning. The past tense 'I've been working' is correct here as it indicates an action continuing up to now.

× I work in a hospital. It's an Infirmary hospital in in our small town. Anne. It was just a small hospital which deliver simple. Simple procedures. Dude.

✓ I work in a hospital. It's an infirmary hospital in our small town, Anne. It is just a small hospital which delivers simple procedures.

The sentence has repeated preposition 'in in' which is incorrect. 'Deliver' should be 'delivers' to agree with singular subject 'hospital'. Also, 'was' changed to 'is' to maintain present tense as the hospital still exists. The word 'Dude' is informal and unnecessary here.

× Yes, definitely it is. Because aside from the fact that we are helping patients to recover from their illness. It is also my coworkers that are. Friendly, helpful every time there is a problem arise in the.

✓ Yes, definitely it is because aside from the fact that we are helping patients to recover from their illnesses, my coworkers are also friendly and helpful every time a problem arises.

The sentence fragments need to be combined for clarity. 'It is also my coworkers that are' is awkward; better to say 'my coworkers are also'. 'Illness' should be plural 'illnesses' as it refers to multiple patients. 'There is a problem arise' is incorrect; correct form is 'a problem arises'.

× I do because. It is just a 5 minute drive away from my home and I don't need to. To stay in the certain place for quite a long time compared to my previous job that I need to stay there for one week. And like here.

✓ I do because it is just a 5-minute drive away from my home and I don't need to stay in a certain place for quite a long time compared to my previous job where I needed to stay there for one week, unlike here.

The sentence has unnecessary periods breaking the flow. 'The certain place' should be 'a certain place' as it is indefinite. 'That I need to stay' should be 'where I needed to stay' to correctly refer to the previous job and maintain past tense. 'And like here' is unclear; 'unlike here' clarifies the contrast.

× My future work plans is to seek employment abroad. That's why I I'm working in a clinical setting up right now. So that when I have a lot of experience here in the Philipines, I am not. I will become.

✓ My future work plans are to seek employment abroad. That's why I'm working in a clinical setting right now, so that when I have a lot of experience here in the Philippines, I will become qualified.

'Plans' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. 'I I'm' is a typo; should be 'I'm'. 'Setting up' is incorrect; 'setting' is correct. The last sentence is incomplete; adding 'qualified' completes the thought logically. 'Philipines' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'Philippines'.