Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence first, then add one or two specific details using linking words to make your answer more natural and effective. Avoid repeating words and keep your sentences concise.

Example: I am currently working as a chef at Tandoori Junction in Canada. Besides cooking, I also plan menus for special occasions like birthday parties or other events.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to add specific details about your role. This will make your answer more coherent and natural.

Example: I work as a chef at Tandoori Junction in Canada. Specifically, I manage portion control and food costing, and I also check the quality and quantity of the ingredients.

Suggestion: Your answer has good content but some grammar mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, it is a wonderful place to work. I have been working here since 2019, and the atmosphere is very positive. The company offers many facilities that encourage employees to stay.

Suggestion: Your answer is quite repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy working here because there are many opportunities to learn. The kitchen staff are very professional, which makes my experience valuable since I joined the company.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but some grammar mistakes and unclear phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, try to link your ideas logically and avoid repetition.

Example: I am currently pursuing a course alongside my job. After completing it, I plan to move overseas to explore new opportunities.

× Yes Sir, I currently working as a chef in in Tandoori Junction here in Canada and my role is to not only work inside the kitchen area, I also plan a menu for the special occasion like Mary's party or some birthday party.

✓ Yes Sir, I am currently working as a chef in Tandoori Junction here in Canada and my role is to not only work inside the kitchen area, but I also plan menus for special occasions like Mary's party or some birthday party.

The original sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before 'currently working', which is necessary for the present continuous tense. Also, 'plan a menu' should be pluralized to 'plan menus' to match the plural 'special occasions'. Adding 'but' improves sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes Sir, I currently working as a chef in in Tandoori Junction here in Canada and my role is to not only work inside the kitchen area, I also plan a menu for the special occasion like Mary's party or some birthday party.

✓ Yes Sir, I am currently working as a chef in Tandoori Junction here in Canada and my role is to not only work inside the kitchen area, but I also plan menus for special occasions like Mary's party or some birthday party.

The phrase 'a menu for the special occasion' should be pluralized to 'menus for special occasions' because the examples given ('Mary's party or some birthday party') indicate multiple events, requiring plural form for consistency.

× Currently I'm working as a chef in thundery junctions in here in Canada and my role is specially to control the portion and and control the food costing and I also check the quality and quantity of the product.

✓ Currently, I'm working as a chef at Tandoori Junction here in Canada and my role is especially to control the portions and control the food costing, and I also check the quality and quantity of the products.

The original sentence has a typo in the restaurant name and incorrect preposition 'in' instead of 'at'. 'Portion' and 'product' should be plural to match the context. 'Specially' should be 'especially' to correctly express purpose.

× Currently I'm working as a chef in thundery junctions in here in Canada and my role is specially to control the portion and and control the food costing and I also check the quality and quantity of the product.

✓ Currently, I'm working as a chef at Tandoori Junction here in Canada and my role is especially to control the portions and control the food costing, and I also check the quality and quantity of the products.

'Portion' and 'product' should be plural ('portions' and 'products') because the role involves managing multiple portions and products, not just one.

× Yes definitely this is a wonderful place to work. I work here since 2019 to till now and the working atmosphere is absolutely brilliant.

✓ Yes, definitely this is a wonderful place to work. I have worked here since 2019 until now and the working atmosphere is absolutely brilliant.

The phrase 'I work here since 2019 to till now' is incorrect because 'since' requires the present perfect tense ('have worked') to indicate an action continuing from the past to the present. Also, 'to till now' is redundant; 'until now' or 'to now' is preferred.

× Yes definitely this is a wonderful place to work. I work here since 2019 to till now and the working atmosphere is absolutely brilliant.

✓ Yes, definitely this is a wonderful place to work. I have worked here since 2019 until now and the working atmosphere is absolutely brilliant.

The preposition 'to till now' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'since 2019 until now' or simply 'since 2019' with present perfect tense.

× There is so many facility which is which is in stick the people to continue with this company.

✓ There are so many facilities which encourage people to continue with this company.

'There is' should be 'There are' to agree with the plural noun 'facilities'. Also, 'facility' should be plural. The phrase 'in stick the people' is incorrect and replaced with 'encourage people' for clarity.

× There is so many facility which is which is in stick the people to continue with this company.

✓ There are so many facilities which encourage people to continue with this company.

The original sentence has awkward and unclear phrasing ('which is which is in stick the people'). This is corrected to a clear and grammatically correct sentence that conveys the intended meaning.

× Yes, definitely this wonderful place to work and I really enjoy my work because there is so many things to learn and learn and kitchen is so well quite the kitchen is stuff is so professionals.

✓ Yes, definitely this is a wonderful place to work and I really enjoy my work because there are so many things to learn and the kitchen is very well equipped; the kitchen staff are very professional.

'There is so many things' should be 'there are so many things' to agree with the plural noun 'things'. 'Kitchen is so well quite' is unclear and corrected to 'kitchen is very well equipped'. 'Kitchen is stuff is so professionals' is corrected to 'kitchen staff are very professional' for subject-verb agreement and clarity.

× Yes, definitely this wonderful place to work and I really enjoy my work because there is so many things to learn and learn and kitchen is so well quite the kitchen is stuff is so professionals.

✓ Yes, definitely this is a wonderful place to work and I really enjoy my work because there are so many things to learn and the kitchen is very well equipped; the kitchen staff are very professional.

The adverb 'quite' is incorrectly used; 'very well equipped' is more appropriate. 'Professionals' should be 'professional' as an adjective describing 'staff'.

× So there is a good experience since I joined this company and I really enjoyed work this work with this company.

✓ So I have had a good experience since I joined this company and I really enjoy working here.

The original sentence has awkward structure and tense inconsistency. 'I really enjoyed work this work with this company' is incorrect; corrected to 'I really enjoy working here' for clarity and correct tense.

× Yes, I planning to currently in persuing some course along with my professional work.

✓ Yes, I am currently planning to pursue some courses along with my professional work.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' for present continuous tense ('I am planning'). 'Persuing' is a misspelling of 'pursuing'. 'Some course' should be pluralized to 'some courses' for natural usage.

× Yes, I planning to currently in persuing some course along with my professional work.

✓ Yes, I am currently planning to pursue some courses along with my professional work.

The phrase 'I planning to currently in persuing' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'I am currently planning to pursue' to correctly use present continuous tense and infinitive verb form.

× So when it when it completed, I will definitely try to move the overseas and try to explore the new opportunity for me and it.

✓ So when it is completed, I will definitely try to move overseas and try to explore new opportunities for myself.

The phrase 'when it when it completed' is repetitive and incorrect; corrected to 'when it is completed' using future time clause with present simple. 'Move the overseas' should be 'move overseas' without 'the'. 'New opportunity' should be plural 'new opportunities' for natural expression. 'For me and it' is unclear and corrected to 'for myself'.