Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, for example, say "I am currently a student because I have been undergoing eye training for the past two months." Also, avoid unnecessary phrases like "you can consider me as."

Example: I am currently a student because I have been undergoing eye training for the past two months.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and contains many errors. You should answer directly and clearly, for example, "I am not working at the moment because I am a student undergoing training." Avoid repeating or unclear phrases.

Example: I am not working at the moment because I am a student undergoing training.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, "Although I am not currently working there, I believe it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive. Moreover, the company offers good benefits and opportunities for professional growth."

Example: Although I am not currently working there, I believe it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive. Moreover, the company offers good benefits and opportunities for professional growth.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to answer directly and use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, "Yes, I would like to work there because the environment is good and supportive. Also, if the pay is good, I would definitely accept the opportunity."

Example: Yes, I would like to work there because the environment is good and supportive. Also, if the pay is good, I would definitely accept the opportunity.

Suggestion: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, "To be honest, I want to become a successful businessman because my father is also a businessman. He often encouraged me to start my own business when I was younger."

Example: To be honest, I want to become a successful businessman because my father is also a businessman. He often encouraged me to start my own business when I was younger.

× Well, currently you can consider me as a student as I had been pursuing my eyes training for the last two months.

✓ Well, currently you can consider me a student as I have been pursuing my eye training for the last two months.

The phrase 'had been pursuing' is past perfect continuous, which is incorrect here because the action is still ongoing or recent. The correct tense is present perfect continuous 'have been pursuing'. Also, 'eyes training' should be 'eye training' as 'eye' is used as an adjective here.

× Well I recently mentioned that I have a student and I am doing the I swing from the last two months so I am not a worker.

✓ Well, I recently mentioned that I am a student and I have been studying for the last two months, so I am not working.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'I have a student' is incorrect; it should be 'I am a student'. 'I am doing the I swing' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it is corrected to 'I have been studying'. Also, 'so I am not a worker' is better expressed as 'so I am not working' to fit the context.

× Well, I am an older worker, but if I get an opportunity in the future to pick up of workers, yes, I think it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive which additionally the company over good benefits and opportunities for professional growth.

✓ Well, I am an older worker, but if I get an opportunity in the future to pick up work, yes, I think it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and supportive. Additionally, the company offers good benefits and opportunities for professional growth.

The phrase 'pick up of workers' is incorrect; it should be 'pick up work'. Also, 'company over good benefits' is incorrect; it should be 'company offers good benefits'. The sentence was also run-on and needed to be split for clarity.

× Well, definitely going to the reason I take the opportunity to to do work where the environment is good an awesome. Moreover if the page is also good. So definitely I go for it.

✓ Well, definitely, I would take the opportunity to work where the environment is good and awesome. Moreover, if the pay is also good, I would definitely go for it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Going to the reason I take the opportunity to to do work' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'I would take the opportunity to work'. 'Page' is a typo for 'pay'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Well, to be honest, I want to become a successful businessman owing to the reason my father is also businessman and often they often make me to start my own business when I get younger.

✓ Well, to be honest, I want to become a successful businessman because my father is also a businessman and he often encourages me to start my own business when I am older.

The phrase 'owing to the reason' is awkward and replaced with 'because'. 'My father is also businessman' needs the article 'a'. 'They often make me to start' is incorrect; it should be 'he often encourages me to start'. 'When I get younger' is illogical and corrected to 'when I am older'.