Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: In English (Cambodia), you should try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using simple and correct sentence structures. Avoid unnecessary words and be direct. For example, say "I am currently unemployed because I resigned from my job as an assistant auditor. Now, I am planning to pursue a master's degree in Canada."

Example: I am currently unemployed because I resigned from my job as an assistant auditor. Now, I am planning to pursue a master's degree in Canada.

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and complete answer. Use correct grammar and vocabulary. For example, say "I used to work at KPMG, which is one of the Big Four accounting firms, in the auditing department."

Example: I used to work at KPMG, which is one of the Big Four accounting firms, in the auditing department.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and clear by using complete sentences and linking words. For example, say "Yes, it is a good place to work because KPMG is a Big Four accounting firm. I gained a lot of experience and faced many challenges there."

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because KPMG is a Big Four accounting firm. I gained a lot of experience and faced many challenges there.

Suggestion: Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words. For example, say "Yes, I liked the place because it was the first company that accepted me without experience. Also, it helped me to learn more about accounting."

Example: Yes, I liked the place because it was the first company that accepted me without experience. Also, it helped me to learn more about accounting.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more structured. For example, say "Well, I am not sure about my future work plans yet because I want to focus on my master's degree first. After I complete it, I will think about my career."

Example: Well, I am not sure about my future work plans yet because I want to focus on my master's degree first. After I complete it, I will think about my career.

× I am an unemployed 'cause I have to resign from my position as assistant auditor for approximately streaming already and recently I am planning to pursue a masters degree. At Canada.

✓ I am unemployed because I had to resign from my position as assistant auditor some time ago, and recently I am planning to pursue a master's degree in Canada.

The use of ''cause'' is informal and incorrect here; ''because'' is appropriate. The phrase ''for approximately streaming already'' is unclear and incorrect; it should be replaced with ''some time ago'' to indicate past resignation. ''Masters degree'' should be ''master's degree'' to show possession. ''At Canada'' is incorrect preposition use; ''in Canada'' is correct.

× At Canada.

✓ In Canada.

The preposition ''at'' is incorrect when referring to countries; ''in'' is the correct preposition to indicate location within a country.

× I used to work at KPMG which is one of the big Four firm Anna so Reigns auditing field.

✓ I used to work at KPMG, which is one of the Big Four firms in the auditing field.

The sentence has unclear and incorrect phrases like ''Anna so Reigns auditing field.'' It should be restructured for clarity and correctness. ''Big Four firm'' should be plural ''firms'' as it refers to a group. Commas are needed to separate clauses.

× Yes. Becauses. As you know, like keep EMT is a BIG4 accounting firm. Before Co soul. Is kill me. A lot of experience as well as the challenging.

✓ Yes, because, as you know, KPMG is a Big Four accounting firm. Before COVID, it gave me a lot of experience as well as challenges.

''Becauses'' is a misspelling of ''because.'' The sentence fragments ''Before Co soul. Is kill me.'' are unclear and incorrect; they should be corrected to ''Before COVID, it gave me...'' to make sense. ''Challenging'' should be plural ''challenges'' to match the context.

× Yes. Becaused. It was a first book place that accepts me without any experience an also. And not only dead but that place also like kill me more exploring about my account.

✓ Yes, because it was the first good place that accepted me without any experience. Also, not only that, but that place helped me explore more about accounting.

''Becaused'' is incorrect; ''because'' is correct. ''First book place'' is likely a misspelling of ''first good place.'' ''Accepts'' should be past tense ''accepted'' to match past context. The phrase ''not only dead but that place also like kill me more exploring about my account'' is unclear and incorrect; it should be rephrased for clarity and grammar.

× An IBM thing after I complete my master.

✓ And I am thinking about that after I complete my master's degree.

''An IBM thing'' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be ''And I am thinking.'' ''Master'' should be ''master's degree'' to show possession. The sentence needs to be completed for clarity.

× I have to resign from my position as assistant auditor for approximately streaming already

✓ I had to resign from my position as assistant auditor some time ago

The phrase ''have to resign'' is present tense but the context indicates a past action; ''had to resign'' is correct. ''For approximately streaming already'' is unclear and incorrect; it should be ''some time ago'' to indicate past time.

× I am planning to pursue a masters degree. At Canada.

✓ I am planning to pursue a master's degree in Canada.

''Masters degree'' should be ''master's degree'' to indicate possession. ''At Canada'' is incorrect preposition use; ''in Canada'' is correct.