Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho câu trả lời không tự nhiên và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và nói rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I am a student and I also work part-time. I try to balance my time between work and studying at university.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng và có ý nghĩa hơn.

Example: I work at a community center and a public school where there are many students. This experience helps me improve my professional skills and work more effectively.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, giải thích rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình.

Example: I think working at the center and public school is good because although there is some pressure, it motivates me to behave better and improve my skills.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và giải thích rõ cảm xúc của mình một cách tự nhiên.

Example: To be honest, I don't feel comfortable working at the public school because many students watch me and sometimes talk behind my back.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt kế hoạch tương lai.

Example: In the future, I hope to work at a company where my older colleagues can help me become more professional and improve my skills.

× I am a student an of course I also working at a part time job at a TH an I spend I spend my time in balance between work and Stew in studying at a university.

✓ I am a student and of course I also work at a part-time job at a TH and I spend my time balancing work and study at university.

The sentence has multiple issues including incorrect word order and verb forms. 'an' should be 'and'. 'working' should be 'work' to match present simple tense. 'part time job' should be 'part-time job' as a compound adjective. 'I spend I spend' is repetitive and incorrect. 'in balance between work and Stew in studying' is incorrect; it should be 'balancing work and study'. 'Stew' is a typo for 'study'. The sentence is corrected to improve clarity and grammar.

× I am a student an of course I also working at a part time job at a TH an I spend I spend my time in balance between work and Stew in studying at a university.

✓ I am a student and of course I also work at a part-time job at a TH and I spend my time balancing work and study at university.

The verb 'working' is incorrectly used after 'I also'. The correct form is the base verb 'work' to match the present simple tense. Using 'working' here is incorrect because it lacks an auxiliary verb.

× I am a student an of course I also working at a part time job at a TH an I spend I spend my time in balance between work and Stew in studying at a university.

✓ I am a student and of course I also work at a part-time job at a TH and I spend my time balancing work and study at university.

The phrase 'in balance between work and Stew in studying' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'balancing work and study'. The preposition 'in' is misused here.

× I working at the center and also a public school where is having a lot of student and I have two acting professionally and it's helping me for a working more effective and more balance in the future.

✓ I work at the center and also at a public school where there are a lot of students. I have two acting professionally and it's helping me work more effectively and have more balance in the future.

'I working' should be 'I work' to use present simple tense. 'where is having' should be 'where there are' to correctly use 'there be' structure. 'student' should be plural 'students'. 'helping me for a working' is incorrect; it should be 'helping me work'. 'more effective' should be 'more effectively' as an adverb modifying 'work'. 'more balance' should be 'have more balance'.

× I working at the center and also a public school where is having a lot of student and I have two acting professionally and it's helping me for a working more effective and more balance in the future.

✓ I work at the center and also at a public school where there are a lot of students. I have two acting professionally and it's helping me work more effectively and have more balance in the future.

The phrase 'where is having a lot of student' is incorrect. The correct form is 'where there are a lot of students' using the 'there be' structure to indicate existence.

× I working at the center and also a public school where is having a lot of student and I have two acting professionally and it's helping me for a working more effective and more balance in the future.

✓ I work at the center and also at a public school where there are a lot of students. I have two acting professionally and it's helping me work more effectively and have more balance in the future.

'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to many individuals.

× I have two acting professionally and it's helping me for a working more effective and more balance in the future.

✓ I have two acting professionally and it's helping me work more effectively and have more balance in the future.

The phrase 'helping me for a working' is incorrect. The verb after 'helping me' should be in base form without 'to' or 'for a'. Also, 'more effective' should be 'more effectively' as an adverb.

× I working at the center and also a public school where is having a lot of student and I have two acting professionally and it's helping me for a working more effective and more balance in the future.

✓ I work at the center and also at a public school where there are a lot of students. I have two acting professionally and it's helping me work more effectively and have more balance in the future.

The preposition 'at' is missing before 'a public school'. Also, 'helping me for a working' is incorrect preposition usage.

× I think I think in the centre or in the public school where is have many eyes on us is make a few more pressure and is have is my active to behave and better in the future more perfection.

✓ I think in the centre or in the public school where many eyes are on us, it makes a bit more pressure and motivates me to behave better and be more perfect in the future.

'where is have many eyes on us' is incorrect; it should be 'where many eyes are on us'. 'is make a few more pressure' should be 'it makes a bit more pressure'. 'is have is my active' is unclear and corrected to 'motivates me'. Pronouns and verb forms are corrected for clarity.

× I think I think in the centre or in the public school where is have many eyes on us is make a few more pressure and is have is my active to behave and better in the future more perfection.

✓ I think in the centre or in the public school where many eyes are on us, it makes a bit more pressure and motivates me to behave better and be more perfect in the future.

The phrase 'where is have many eyes on us' is incorrect. The correct form is 'where many eyes are on us' using the 'there be' structure.

× I think I think in the centre or in the public school where is have many eyes on us is make a few more pressure and is have is my active to behave and better in the future more perfection.

✓ I think in the centre or in the public school where many eyes are on us, it makes a bit more pressure and motivates me to behave better and be more perfect in the future.

The pronoun 'is' is incorrectly used multiple times. It should be 'it' to refer to the situation. Also, 'my active' is unclear and replaced with 'motivates me'.

× I think I think in the centre or in the public school where is have many eyes on us is make a few more pressure and is have is my active to behave and better in the future more perfection.

✓ I think in the centre or in the public school where many eyes are on us, it makes a bit more pressure and motivates me to behave better and be more perfect in the future.

The preposition 'on' in 'eyes on us' is correct, but the sentence structure around it is incorrect and has been corrected for clarity.

× To be honest I don't really comfortable when I working at the public school with having a lot of student looking at me an elevating me when they are just a student and they can talking behind my back like.

✓ To be honest, I don't really feel comfortable when I am working at the public school with a lot of students looking at me and evaluating me when they are just students and they can talk behind my back.

'I don't really comfortable' is missing the verb 'feel'. 'I working' should be 'I am working'. 'a lot of student' should be 'a lot of students'. 'elevating' is incorrect; it should be 'evaluating'. 'they can talking' should be 'they can talk'. Pronouns and verb forms are corrected.

× To be honest I don't really comfortable when I working at the public school with having a lot of student looking at me an elevating me when they are just a student and they can talking behind my back like.

✓ To be honest, I don't really feel comfortable when I am working at the public school with a lot of students looking at me and evaluating me when they are just students and they can talk behind my back.

'student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to many individuals. Also, 'a student' should be 'students' to match plural context.

× To be honest I don't really comfortable when I working at the public school with having a lot of student looking at me an elevating me when they are just a student and they can talking behind my back like.

✓ To be honest, I don't really feel comfortable when I am working at the public school with a lot of students looking at me and evaluating me when they are just students and they can talk behind my back.

'working' should be 'am working' to form present continuous tense. 'having' is unnecessary and removed. 'talking' should be 'talk' after modal verb 'can'.

× I in my future, I imagine. That I can work at a. Company where is many college are older than me, they can helping me too. Uhm, both became more professional and perfection in my working skill.

✓ In my future, I imagine that I can work at a company where many colleagues are older than me; they can help me too. Then, both become more professional and perfect in my working skills.

'is many college' is incorrect; should be 'many colleagues'. 'can helping' should be 'can help'. 'became' should be 'become' to match future intention. 'perfection' should be 'perfect' as adjective. 'working skill' should be plural 'working skills'.

× I in my future, I imagine. That I can work at a. Company where is many college are older than me, they can helping me too. Uhm, both became more professional and perfection in my working skill.

✓ In my future, I imagine that I can work at a company where many colleagues are older than me; they can help me too. Then, both become more professional and perfect in my working skills.

The preposition 'at' before 'a company' is correct but the sentence is fragmented and corrected for clarity.